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A Fallen Angel

Heaven was crying that night; when I first glimpsed her. She was tattooed and painted with mascara and scarlet lipstick. And raindrops morphed into teardrops; trickling down her youthful face. Something about her was different; she seemed out of place. And in a shaky voice, a fallen Angel propositioned me. I saw the tears in her eyes And my heart began to break; she looked so scared. Abandoned to the streets she did what it took to survive; and I could not fault her. She deserved my pity not my condemnation; for even Angels need to eat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/9/2018 10:18:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 4/10/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/30/2018 4:55:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Emile - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2018 6:19:00 AM
So terribly sad, great poem sweet Emile, thank you and congrats:)-luloo
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Date: 3/21/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Laura, your comments are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2018 7:18:00 PM
Strong start with "heaven was crying that night" when we realize the context of a first night for this teen... Excellent emotional value.
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Date: 3/10/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2018 10:56:00 AM
It's not unusual...Nice Angel...Enjoyed it Emile...All the best
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Date: 3/9/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2018 9:48:00 AM
Great entry Emile, best wishes...
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Date: 3/9/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

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