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A Fake Friend

friends are the recipe of life.. but some hurt like a knife friends are not just to spell.. they are someone who strike and bell ?? friends might be true or fake.. you understand this only when you break.. fake friends are easy to find.. cuz they wear personality blind! real friends are wheels of life's track.. but fake one's stab u from back.. real one's fill life with joy.. others play with it like a toy.. fake is a word of four.. ruins life like war.. so is the word real.. but it has a golden heart to deal.. real one's value trust.. but for the fake its just thrust.. real friends have feelings blue.. but fake ones have pain grew. whenever you are sad and want to cry real one's will lend their shoulder and your tears will dry....!! :) :)

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Date: 7/27/2016 10:12:00 PM
ridhi jain, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/24/2016 1:40:00 AM
One more thing Ridhi, I hope your days get better and so does your choice in friends... I like your title. A Fake friend. ....we should not be blind... Welcome to poetry soup, you are going to love it here...skat
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Ridhi Jain
Date: 7/24/2016 1:42:00 AM
i hope u too love my poems
Date: 7/24/2016 1:37:00 AM
Lots of fake ones, I like how you use the word fake in your post. Ridhi, easy to find and spot, especially when hanging out over dinner.... Awesome and a 7. Skat
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