A Dying Soul

I tell you, they’re melting
Back to us, Dear Listeners. It's a scarlet horizon
	Sleeping with the night.

	Choose one device to stick with it
Is another pain and this will be the last word for you
	To night.
	If you don’t like. Well, friend, to go to hell!

	But believe me before you go
It’s not the blue feeling you try to comprehend
And what I have inside me with such enormous
	Thing they called it L.O.V.E.
	Leaving rock and sand behind.

	This is the forbear, twisted 
	E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G  from the depth
To the sea up. 

	My Dear Reader, I am dying. Your poetry
Or your writing will do any good to my illness.
	Please, don’t cry. And go out of the light.
	I stopped writing as I started watching
Everyone.  Except you.
	I don’t mind to die for you, My Dear One. 
	Just tell me if I have done it right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Comporozos Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 1:03 PM
Nice try. Happy to read it
Zamalea Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Vassilis: I am pleased for your comments. Thanks George.
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:24 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
Zamalea Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:58 PM
My Dear Poet Destroyer A: I cannot tell you how delighted I am PoetrySoup and YOU considered me for a featured EXPOSE and I am deeply in PoetrySoup and YOU debt for such a honor. I convey my personal thanks to Everyone. George
Dom Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Hi George, your epistle captured my attention. That first line is a marvel and the last line seals it. Well done and welcome.
Zamalea Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Michael: I am overjoyed with such words of yours and I am overwhelmed by PoetrySoup Staff and you guys to make it possible. You and You know that I am grateful for that selection. Well, thanks to EVERYONE back there. Encore une fois, merci beaucoup! George
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 5:16 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today George. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Zamalea Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Carol: I indebted to you, and accept my thanks. This poem was written in French. It's a surprise it has featured. Nothing is too to say thank you and those wonderful poets of Poetry Soup and Its Staffs. Geoge
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