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A Dying Soul

I tell you, they’re melting Back to us, Dear Listeners. It's a scarlet horizon Sleeping with the night. Choose one device to stick with it Is another pain and this will be the last word for you To night. If you don’t like. Well, friend, to go to hell! But believe me before you go It’s not the blue feeling you try to comprehend And what I have inside me with such enormous Thing they called it L.O.V.E. Leaving rock and sand behind. This is the forbear, twisted E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G from the depth To the sea up. My Dear Reader, I am dying. Your poetry Or your writing will do any good to my illness. Please, don’t cry. And go out of the light. I stopped writing as I started watching Everyone. Except you. I don’t mind to die for you, My Dear One. Just tell me if I have done it right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/14/2013 1:03:00 PM
Nice try. Happy to read it
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George Zamalea
Date: 7/15/2013 6:50:00 PM
Vassilis: I am pleased for your comments. Thanks George.
Date: 7/14/2013 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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George Zamalea
Date: 7/15/2013 6:58:00 PM
My Dear Poet Destroyer A: I cannot tell you how delighted I am PoetrySoup and YOU considered me for a featured EXPOSE and I am deeply in PoetrySoup and YOU debt for such a honor. I convey my personal thanks to Everyone. George
Date: 7/12/2013 7:51:00 PM
Hi George, your epistle captured my attention. That first line is a marvel and the last line seals it. Well done and welcome.
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George Zamalea
Date: 7/15/2013 7:05:00 PM
Michael: I am overjoyed with such words of yours and I am overwhelmed by PoetrySoup Staff and you guys to make it possible. You and You know that I am grateful for that selection. Well, thanks to EVERYONE back there. Encore une fois, merci beaucoup! George
Date: 10/4/2012 5:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today George. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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George Zamalea
Date: 7/15/2013 6:49:00 PM
Carol: I indebted to you, and accept my thanks. This poem was written in French. It's a surprise it has featured. Nothing is too to say thank you and those wonderful poets of Poetry Soup and Its Staffs. Geoge

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