Get Your Premium Membership

A Drunken Rant

Oh, you say you love me; is it true? The sky, it appears, is blue; is it blue? I lived a long life without a damn clue, If ever I find God anywhere, I’ll sue. Methinks, it’s the devil I better pursue Quash holy water, foment the devil’s brew Go and pick a gang of disgruntled crew to steal the Dog Star its brilliant hue, And garner the dawn’s glistening dew. Live a lot dandy if all the knowledge I knew and up from the sky get a bird’s-eye view, Or obtain from the Mystic a divine cue, Untaught, much anguish could soon ensue; Maybe, put aside my search and quietly rue At long last bid to the world my sad adieu! ~Contest: Your Best Monorhyme Sponsor: William Kekaula. ~A Rant contest by Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/22/2021 10:50:00 AM
A very nice flow to this unhappy rant! very good!! congrats on your win!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2021 9:20:00 AM
Dear Abdul, incisive emotions cut and color every line of your brilliant poem and every line is a gem. I adore the title and the barbed spirit of this impassioned piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in William's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/22/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Susan. Cannot tell you how much I appreciate your thoughtful comment. Glad you liked it.
Date: 8/21/2021 2:00:00 PM
Abdul, this has such edgy attitude in it, that with its humor, it sets itself apart from the rest. More than rhyme, this poem has verve, personality. Deserving of top placement. Congratulations for taking your talents to introduce yourself.
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/21/2021 3:23:00 PM
Appreciate your insightful comment. You went straight to the soul of my poem. Thanks
Date: 8/20/2021 8:08:00 PM
An earthy presence precedes your words with hints of rawness well-veiled amidst subtlety. I'm pleased, Abdul, for sharing your intriguing talents, Aloha!
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/20/2021 8:35:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it. This is my favorite. Thanks a lot.
Date: 5/11/2018 12:21:00 PM
A fun rant to read. Congrats on your silver medal win, Abdul.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs