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A Dream

Outside my window A blowing snow storm The wind blows fiercely Then the snow falling Covering the ground A heavy snowfall Blanketed the ground It blocked both the doors There was no way out In the early morn My eyes opened wide I looked outside There was no snow storm It was just a dream To me it was real

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Date: 12/4/2017 7:14:00 PM
Sometimes we woke up with our dream and wished it was true. I am a dreamer too and I believe dreams have meanings. Yours I'm sure means Yuletide is coming. Thanks my dear friend for sharing your lovely dream in this lovely verse. Have a great week!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 8:04:00 PM
Hello Galeo DS,I am also a dreamer, i day dream a lot. I also believe dreams have meaning. I just do not know what the meaning is.Oh Yuletide coming -that makes sense to me. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/4/2017 4:00:00 PM
Oh you do tempt fate,, the last time i dream't of snow, i was captive for over two weeks at home.....anyhow love your poem,,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 5:23:00 PM
Hello Harry, Yep that was my dream, both doors piled with snow and noway out. I sure woke up fast. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/4/2017 10:04:00 AM
Wow! Your 'real' dream wants me to share it with you, Darlene:) for I have never seen real snow in my life...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 5:30:00 PM
Hello Jo, you never seen snow! You must live in a warm climate. I live in Canada, we have 4 seasons,they are summer, autumn,winter, spring. Each season has its own beauty. It is almost winter here. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/3/2017 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful dreamtime poem, Darlene!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 8:19:00 AM
Hello James nice to meet you. Thank you for your lovely comment.I am glad that it was not a snow storm. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/3/2017 1:53:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful poem with the perfect imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/3/2017 3:16:00 PM
Hello Ravi,I hope you had a nice day. Thank you for your nice comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/2/2017 4:48:00 PM
Nice Dream Snug and warm in Bed I hope. Very good my Friend enjoyed this read
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:17:00 PM
Hello Christopher,yes warm and snug in bed.I am pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/2/2017 1:28:00 PM
You as well Darlene. I hope you have a great Christmas with friends and family.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:18:00 PM
Hello Richard , I also wish you a great Christmas with your family and friends. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/2/2017 4:37:00 AM
You dreamt of this beautiful poem...which now is real...god bless...^WW^
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 6:58:00 AM
Hello W.W. Thank you . God Bless you to my friend. Have a nice day friend.
Date: 12/2/2017 4:21:00 AM
Winter is coming ... your dream just presages its arrival, Darlene. Very perceptive poem. Your pen expressed this dream with waking clarity. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 7:00:00 AM
Hello Freddie my dream seemed real because the wind was howling during the night, it sounded like a snow storm. Peace and love Always my friend.
Date: 12/2/2017 1:21:00 AM
I too am a dreamer. I’ll bet you were glad you were dreaming.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/2/2017 7:13:00 AM
Hello Richard, my dream was more of a nightmare. Both doors were blocked and could not get out. I hope that never happens. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/1/2017 5:54:00 PM
Some dreams do seems so real. A beautiful dream you had... hugs and smiles :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2017 7:55:00 PM
Yes Akkina some dreams do seem real. hugs and smiles to you my friend.
Date: 12/1/2017 5:44:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem and I'm glad it was only a dream. I'm not a fan of snow and cold weather. I do think this is a great poem with the perfect imagery.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you James I am not a fan of winter either. Thank you for your nice comment my friend. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/1/2017 2:52:00 PM
- We got some snow today - Lovely dream, Darlene - I posted a poem about it today - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2017 8:03:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile,I will read your poem. We a re still in Fall weather. I will enjoy it for as long it will last. Happy weekend to you as well. G=Have a nice weekend my friend.
Date: 11/30/2017 8:49:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Thanks for your comment on my recent sonnet!! "A Dream" is quite interesting. The situation you developed with your theme, to me, was kind of a daydream of sorts that many of us sometimes do on occasion. Everything appeared to be real, up and until your eyes opened wide. Yet, everything appeared to be so real. I really like the direct way in which you expressed this whole narrative. Sometimes when I'm deep in thought about a poem, I actually slip into a daydream mode. Best, Gary
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2017 5:49:00 PM
Hello Gary,your welcome. I do enjoy your poetry. In my dream I woke up,I looked out to see there was not a snow storm.That dream seemed so real.I just wrote what iseen in my dream. Best wishes to you as well my friend.
Date: 11/29/2017 2:53:00 PM
Some dreams do seem so real and they stay with you in memory for a very long time. Makes one wonder. Your dream was a wonder! Lovely imagery Darlene! : )
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/29/2017 2:59:00 PM
Some dreams still stay with me. Yes some dreams are real. Thank you. The snow dream seemed real, but did not turn out to be real. I am glad that it was only a dream.
Date: 11/29/2017 9:11:00 AM
It might have been a dream, Darlene, but the lovely picture you created is real! Regards // paul
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/29/2017 3:03:00 PM
Hello Paul,yes the picture was real. Glad there was no snow storm. Regards Darlene De Beaulieu.
Date: 11/28/2017 11:10:00 AM
I wonder the meanings of our dreams. So interesting!, I really enjoyed xxoo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/29/2017 3:09:00 PM
I have the same dreams often and I do wonder what they mean.I wish I knew. have a nice evening my friend.xxxx-oo
Date: 11/27/2017 4:54:00 PM
And most likely will be...Good luck...All the best to you Darlene...Happy holiday
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2017 8:41:00 AM
Yes the snow is coming soon,so sad. It is not my favourite season. Happy Holiday to you as well Micheal. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 11/27/2017 3:15:00 PM
Can't believe it's this late without a major snow event, may be a mild winter, enjoyed it Darlene...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2017 9:18:00 AM
I do hope that we have a mild winter to. Thank you Charlie. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 11/27/2017 2:49:00 PM
You brought the dream to life Darlene, showing how real it feels. Well done :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, that night the wind was blowing strongly all evening long. So the wind made me dream of a snow storm that lasted all night. The dream semed so real to me. have a nice day my friend.

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