A Dollhouse

A dollhouse is a palace to an angelic girl of four O, let her live there forever innocent of trap doors

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/3/2022 9:24:00 PM

Oh how I loved the doll house my grandfather, Popa built me. I still have it without tiny furniture inside. The carpeted floors and real wallpaper walls have yellowed and curled, but such sweet memories of it came back to me after reading your poem. I'm delighted to have found it.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/14/2022 12:22:00 PM

Milton said it best Gershon. I repeat his comment and add that, you are only a child once and then you grow up. A child should enjoy every playing moment before they realize what the world has to offer and change their care free perspective. Thanks for sharing Gershon thought of my daughter Ashley...

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/14/2022 8:55:00 AM

A delightful poem, gw. Every little girl of four should be living in a carefree palace and foresee a long, happy future. May it be true for every little girl in the world.

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2022 11:28:00 PM

No place is now safe for a girl child. Even in doll houses, there are trap doors !

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/13/2022 9:33:00 PM

If only that were possible.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2022 9:38:00 PM

And why not? -- Raise the girl in Buckingham Palace! :)