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A Dim-Lit Day Ifl

On a dim-lit day of drizzle I sit beneath the same old oak where we carved hearts with our names amused by how child-like it was I feel a need on this date to remember really remember, the passing of years covered in the dust beneath the cluttered cobwebs that hang in my soul, of tear-stained dormant memories and what were joyous times spent with you until the Angles came and I became a broken wheel on the pain-soaked path to nowhere 2/4/23

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Date: 2/22/2023 6:59:00 AM
- Deeply moving poem, Frederic - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:41:00 AM
Frederic, this touched me. I feel your hurt. Sorry for your loss, my friend. Great writing.. keep it up! Congratulations on your win in my contest. All the best.. Charlie
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:42:00 PM
"tear-stained dormant memories" - beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2023 2:58:00 PM
Wow Frederic … so much nuanced passion and emotion wrapped in sweet and sad memories. I love this journey you have described in eloquent detail . Blessings, Susan :)
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