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A Different Eye, When I Think of David Bowie

A DIFFERENT EYE (When I Think of David Bowie) When I think of David Bowie, every song he sung was showy. He was sinewy, not doughy, cause the white stuff was so blowy. Yet his music was amazing, and the concepts were so blazing. He could sing and act while crazing, in the phantom vision's mazing. Bowie, so alien and odd here, with the drum beat in his mind's ear. His words were pointed and austere, with a life that pushed away fear. He was always introspective, with one eye on the collective. He opposed mankind's objective, that obsessed on one perspective. He was stone handsome in his face; Bowie moved with abstracted grace. He transformed all the arts in place, while his mind was off-course in space. He is the man that fell to earth, crashed dim, in umbra at his birth. He's the Starman in his sole worth, pursuing Lazarus's rebirth. Bowie's life burned awfully fast, for lots of roles in which he's cast. The fluid flame can never last, when it darts missiles from the past. Now he's dead and they are praising, his work, once found self abasing, in the lyrics of his phrasing, they find now, is curtain raising. We will miss his mystifying, that he sang while he was dying. Cause he's deft in his defying, his Black Star persists in flying. By Edlynn Nau

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/30/2016 5:25:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute Edlynn I was lucky enough to see him in concert many many years ago:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 5/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
Uh! I am so envious that you got to see him perform! He's not just the music but the entire darn show (music, dance, acting, stage art, props, film)! Thank you JAN for reading this!
Date: 2/12/2016 1:26:00 PM
Hello Edlynn. This poem captures David Bowie perfectly. What a lovely tribute. Haven't visited you in a while, my friend. I'm glad I checked back in. hugs. Janece
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 2/12/2016 2:38:00 PM
Oh just Posted: "Fish to Fishes" and "Lines" I'd love you to peek at these two! Do you have a few you want me to see?
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 2/12/2016 2:33:00 PM
How nice of you to stop in for a read Janece and THANK YOU so much! My life has been filled with health issues and fraught with struggles settling after an out-of-state move from a flood. I think I will NEVER feel settled. AnyWho, it means my showing up is off/on but I have a goal of posting four poems a month NO MATTER THE CHAOS! I'm so delighted you feel I did justice to David. You should see the Watercolor I have to go with this. Too bad I only have an iPad.
Date: 1/13/2016 4:24:00 AM
- Great written, Edlynn - R.I.P. David Bowie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 1/13/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! Certainly was a challenge!
Date: 1/13/2016 12:54:00 AM
A nice dedication to a wonderful musician Edlynn, Well put together enjoyed the read Best regards Kevin
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 1/13/2016 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Kevin, so much! We truly will miss him. He made us pay attention in a very edgy way.

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