A Diamond

Once I held a diamond in my hand, whose beauty consumed me like a fire. With every sparkle the flame was fanned, her every touch stoked my desire. I was afraid to let her beauty shine, my lovely diamond I would not share. So in total darkness I kept her blind, I shut the door and held her there. One day I took her out to see the sun, how she shimmered in those rays of light. When her moment in the sun was done, I put her in my pocket and shut it tight. Somewhere in the night she disappeared, for I had woke to find my diamond gone. The day had come that I had feared, the ray of light was taken from my dawn. In my heart I allowed jealousy to rule and let slip through my hands a precious jewel. 11/4/18
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Awtry Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:39 PM
More congrats! :)
Rushing Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you PS!
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Wren, what a sad outcome, but a lesson well learned. Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
Rushing Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Thank you Mark!
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Wow, an excellent poem. Congratulations for your win :)
Rushing Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Thank you Heidi, have a wonderful weekend!
Awtry Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 6:33 AM
Back with congratulations:)
Rushing Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Thank you P.S.! Have a blessed day!
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 12:57 AM
Beautifully penned, Wren. Congrats on your top win.
Rushing Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Line! Have a lovely weekend my friend!
Sharma Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Nice one
Awtry Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 2:37 PM
beautifully written. a lesson well learned :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Hello Wren, this poem was a bit sad. Yet i found it to be a lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Rushing Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Darlene, you have a nice day as well.
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