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A Diamond

Once I held a diamond in my hand, whose beauty consumed me like a fire. With every sparkle the flame was fanned, her every touch stoked my desire. I was afraid to let her beauty shine, my lovely diamond I would not share. So in total darkness I kept her blind, I shut the door and held her there. One day I took her out to see the sun, how she shimmered in those rays of light. When her moment in the sun was done, I put her in my pocket and shut it tight. Somewhere in the night she disappeared, for I had woke to find my diamond gone. The day had come that I had feared, the ray of light was taken from my dawn. In my heart I allowed jealousy to rule and let slip through my hands a precious jewel. 11/4/18

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Date: 3/21/2019 7:39:00 PM
More congrats! :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/22/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you PS!
Date: 3/21/2019 7:04:00 PM
Wren, what a sad outcome, but a lesson well learned. Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Wren Rushing
Date: 3/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 1/11/2019 11:55:00 AM
Wow, an excellent poem. Congratulations for your win :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/11/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 1/11/2019 6:33:00 AM
Back with congratulations:)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/11/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you P.S.! Have a blessed day!
Date: 1/11/2019 12:57:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Wren. Congrats on your top win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/11/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you Line! Have a lovely weekend my friend!
Date: 11/13/2018 8:07:00 PM
Nice one
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Date: 11/4/2018 2:37:00 PM
beautifully written. a lesson well learned :)
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Date: 11/4/2018 1:42:00 PM
Hello Wren, this poem was a bit sad. Yet i found it to be a lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/4/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, you have a nice day as well.

Book: Shattered Sighs