A Desert Trek

A group of three set out on a mountain trek
Beyond the known borders into regions strange 
Climbing up steep and rocky paths
Daringly they moved forward
Engrossed by the beauty of the mountains
Flaunting their towering summits
Governed by an instinctive urge for adventure
Headed to the vast stretch of sands
In no hurry were they but in a relaxed mood.

Just a mile away stood the tall mountain peaks
Kissing the seams of the heavens
Lovesome was the evening and clear was the sky        
Mild and pleasant was the climate 
Never knew any fatigue
Oblivious of time speeding by
Passed across the vast stretch of sands 
        
Quarter to a mile, the trek went haywire
Rapid was the arrival of the night
Sun had gone down in the west
Tedious was the journey in dim light
Unable to travel any further
Vanquished they felt, like defeated soldiers
         
Watchful they were of hindrances on the way like;
Xerophytes with thorns and humpy sand dunes
Yearning for safety, they retraced their steps,
Zooming through engulfing darkness…..


May.25.2022

Abecedarian Poetry Form Contest 
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:22 AM
WOW! Excellent Abecedarin, Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Quite the adventure they took upon themselves. Very engaging poem. Thanks for sharing you gift of poetry with us, my friend. Bill
May Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 2:55 PM
Well done Valsa, Best wishes
Peck Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 12:44 PM
A very engrossing tale, Valsa. And you wrote the Abecedarian beautifully. Best of luck!
Poet Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Valsa, you have produced some lovely metaphors throughout this amazing poetry. The Abecedarian depicts a perilous trip and a fascinating plot. The emotional sequences of a previously unsuccessful and prematurely terminated encounter. My best wishes for the contest.
Leffanta Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Well thought and done (it gets bloody cold in a desert after the sun goes down)! Aloha!
Anaya Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 10:30 AM
A daring trek and intriguing narrative, in the A-Z format, with intense scenes of an adventure ill-fated and gone awry...hope they made it out! Good luck Valsa.
Pandit Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Well crafted images along the trek, Valsa.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 3:32 AM
And that's the alphabet amplified.
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