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A Desert Trek

A group of three set out on a mountain trek Beyond the known borders into regions strange Climbing up steep and rocky paths Daringly they moved forward Engrossed by the beauty of the mountains Flaunting their towering summits Governed by an instinctive urge for adventure Headed to the vast stretch of sands In no hurry were they but in a relaxed mood. Just a mile away stood the tall mountain peaks Kissing the seams of the heavens Lovesome was the evening and clear was the sky Mild and pleasant was the climate Never knew any fatigue Oblivious of time speeding by Passed across the vast stretch of sands Quarter to a mile, the trek went haywire Rapid was the arrival of the night Sun had gone down in the west Tedious was the journey in dim light Unable to travel any further Vanquished they felt, like defeated soldiers Watchful they were of hindrances on the way like; Xerophytes with thorns and humpy sand dunes Yearning for safety, they retraced their steps, Zooming through engulfing darkness….. May.25.2022 Abecedarian Poetry Form Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/31/2022 8:22:00 AM
WOW! Excellent Abecedarin, Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Quite the adventure they took upon themselves. Very engaging poem. Thanks for sharing you gift of poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 5/26/2022 2:55:00 PM
Well done Valsa, Best wishes
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Date: 5/25/2022 12:44:00 PM
A very engrossing tale, Valsa. And you wrote the Abecedarian beautifully. Best of luck!
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Date: 5/25/2022 12:12:00 PM
Valsa, you have produced some lovely metaphors throughout this amazing poetry. The Abecedarian depicts a perilous trip and a fascinating plot. The emotional sequences of a previously unsuccessful and prematurely terminated encounter. My best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/25/2022 10:56:00 AM
Well thought and done (it gets bloody cold in a desert after the sun goes down)! Aloha!
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Date: 5/25/2022 10:30:00 AM
A daring trek and intriguing narrative, in the A-Z format, with intense scenes of an adventure ill-fated and gone awry...hope they made it out! Good luck Valsa.
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Date: 5/25/2022 5:24:00 AM
Well crafted images along the trek, Valsa.
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Date: 5/25/2022 3:32:00 AM
And that's the alphabet amplified.
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