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A Delicious Day

Today and every day is really quite delicious The love that we munch on is really quite nutritious There's Vitamins L, O, V, and E Keeping us dudes as happy as can be If you run out of Vitamins, I'll throw in some kisses © Jack Ellison 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 11:48:00 PM

cute as can be, Jack!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2015 7:32:00 AM

Thank you dear Andrea! Have a bright sunshiny Sunday!!! Loving hugs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/11/2015 10:41:00 PM

I could use some my friend

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2015 7:22:00 AM

Then by the power invested in me, I grant your wish, my son!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/11/2015 3:35:00 PM

This was fantastic! One of your very best!Dragon thinks it has something to do with Candy Chocolate Kisses... His favorite... He's expecting a package of them shortly. Don't worry, I distract him st the ice cream parlor... This Dragon can be very high maintaince but fun... P.S. While here I discovered John Williams. He's perfect for our group of fun loving poets.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2015 4:18:00 PM

Thanks a bunch my dear Carol! I've also checked out John Williams... I think you're right! xxx

John Williams

Date: 4/11/2015 9:56:00 AM

Hello Jack, That is a clever limerick. I've never got those kinds of vitamins at the chemist before. I will have to ask the young lady which shelf they're on, I just hope she doesn't slap my face. .....Kind regards----John

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2015 11:49:00 AM

LOL Just be careful and be ready for all eventualities! The end result is well worth the dangers!!!... Jack

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2015 6:58:00 AM

aww cute:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thank you dear sis! Hugs, Jack xxx