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A Deep Breath of You

A deep breath of you I see you... looking at me Visions of you... sets my soul free Your hazel eyes... shine ever so bright So deep in the night... beckoning me inside Now my spirit ignites... and, my soul takes flight together we unite lying in paradise I take a deep breath of you and dive deep in your pools My soul and spirit renew now I'm your carefree fool I take a deep breath of you I'm swimming inside of you You refresh me like dew Are you feeling me too? March 06,2017

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Terry O'Leary
Date: 3/9/2017 4:31:00 PM
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Seriously sensual, well rhymed and... well done!! Terry
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/9/2017 4:54:00 PM
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Thanks Terry, it's a real compliment coming from you, thanks for the visit!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 3/7/2017 8:56:00 AM
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Lovely romantic poem, John:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2017 9:41:00 AM
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Thanks Jo, Nice to "see" you again, have a great day!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/6/2017 8:24:00 PM
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Sensual and romantic at the same time John~very lovely poem for your wife! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 9:44:00 PM
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She is my inspiration for romantic writes, thanks for the visit.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/6/2017 3:32:00 PM
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So very beautiful John...super romantic
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 3:40:00 PM
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Thanks Tim, I'm glad you like it, coming from you, that means a lot!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/6/2017 3:19:00 PM
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The title says it all, nice work John...
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 3:38:00 PM
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Thanks Charlie, yeah titles are important to draw the reader in, glad this wasn't a disappointment.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2017 2:05:00 PM
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Sounds romantic and filled with love to me. Nicely crafted John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 3:36:00 PM
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Thanks Chris, yeah she inspires me still after 22 years.
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Jonathan Smith
Date: 3/6/2017 1:45:00 PM
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nice work....it so deep... thanks John...
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 1:50:00 PM
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Thanks Jonathan for the visit and comment!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 3/6/2017 1:39:00 PM
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how enticing can this be, john... wish this melody can be turned into a song... wow and huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 1:50:00 PM
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Hi Nette thanks for your comment, yeah I'm working on this as a song but grew impatient, posted it as is, glad you see the potential!

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