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A Death and a Coronation

Over the west Sun dies, oozing blood, The hillside glows in a ruddy blaze, Pink and crimson fade slowly around, And a pallid shade taints the twilight haze. By and by, darkness descends like foggy mist, Wrapping the Earth in a blanket of gloom And God turns on his ornate chandeliers To illumine the world in effulgent gleam Attended by a cortege of starry maids The Full Moon arrives in her glowing raiment Evading the amorous presence of clouds She enthrones herself before the royal regiment So glad she is in her princely state And in her fair mien, she takes delight Bards and lovers have often been mesmerized By such charm surpassing all that is bright Beaming, she gives the night its nocturnal glee Beckoning us heavenward to gaze and praise. With benign grace and regal grandeur she smiles On kings and clowns and on all the human race She changes her contours with every unleashing night Constantly renewing and reveling as a glamorous queen She leaves the world aglow beneath the blue sky Lending the night its unrivaled celestial sheen April.13. 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
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Date: 4/14/2022 4:40:00 PM
Very smooth rhythm in your entry, Valsa. Good luck my friend! Bill
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Date: 4/14/2022 1:19:00 PM
Superb pen Valsa tells so well the working of the moon with great rhyme and flow.
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Date: 4/14/2022 1:14:00 PM
An exquisitely written description of the rising of a full moon. steadily developing, with images of nighttime pleasure interspersed. Valsa, your wonderful pen shines brightly as it usually does.
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Date: 4/14/2022 9:50:00 AM
Your pen has a wondrous might, you write of the moon as a royal within the stars up high, a regal queen - my favorite lines are - She leaves the world aglow beneath the blue sky lending the night its unrivaled celestial sheen - Beautiful poetry my friend, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/14/2022 6:04:00 AM
the vocabulary and title speak to me of Jesus, but in veiled form. Maybe its just Easter vibes, from heven? From disciples of today? shalom, shalom dear Sis. Happy @Easter@ resurrection weekend.
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Date: 4/13/2022 11:54:00 AM
Valsa-sunsets, chandelier--stars, I took delight in your exquisite depiction of a moonscape's coronation. Good Luck!
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Date: 4/13/2022 11:51:00 AM
The moon - full or not - proves how comforting something familiar can be to humans. Although pockmarked, like a familiar face, we continue to gaze at it in wonder. Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Date: 4/13/2022 10:11:00 AM
A poem clothed in shimmering moonlight imagery and your always stunning poetic phrases and choice of imagery. I see this as another winner! Happy Easter dear friend.
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Date: 4/13/2022 9:40:00 AM
Excellent imagery of the ever-changing sky with sunsets some so vivid!
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Date: 4/13/2022 8:51:00 AM
Another cinematic write from your glamorous pen! Expressions that are so uniquely yours. I love this. A FAV for me.
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Date: 4/13/2022 7:29:00 AM
I love the way you described the stars. Great imagery. A wonderful poem.
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Date: 4/13/2022 4:55:00 AM
Rise of a full moon depicted in exquisite vocabulary--unfolding slowly with scenes of nocturnal glee. Your gifted pen shines as always, Valsa.
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