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A Day In the Life

Propelled by snorkel and scuba That dreamy swim to Aruba But the trip was long Why? A heading quite wrong Ended here...welcome to Cuba

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2013 12:30:00 AM

hahaha, I wonder if I subconsciously used a title I'd seen of yours before way back here for my current set of haiku Anyway, I cam way back here to tell you: on my dream sequence limerick, that was totally invented. I started doing a limerick for the contest: Last Night I dreamt, and that is the weird thing I came up with. I have to apologize. I am not fond of it. But I am glad if you enjoyed it. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2012 9:11:00 PM

GREAT job with this one. ME LIKES a lot.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/28/2010 6:48:00 PM

I see you are a limerick specialist..some really good ones! BG

James Fraser

Date: 2/11/2010 3:14:00 PM

Kool title Duke, great Beatles track >> James

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/30/2010 7:32:00 AM

Love it!!! Jeralynn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2010 6:46:00 AM

Welcome to soup if I have not told you before. LOL did you meet the "Old Man and The Sea" along the way. Keep the laughter flowing for we need it here at soup. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/25/2010 5:18:00 AM

funny

Nicole King

Date: 1/24/2010 11:34:00 AM

This is very nice. i like like it,...nikki

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/24/2010 10:21:00 AM

Cute Duke. I will have to read more of your writings. I'm off to church now. Thanks for your nice comments on my haiku. Love, Joyce