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A Day In the Life

Propelled by snorkel and scuba
That dreamy swim to Aruba
But the trip was long
Why? A heading quite wrong
Ended here...welcome to Cuba

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Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2013 at 12:30 AM

hahaha, I wonder if I subconsciously used a title I'd seen of yours before way back here for my current set of haiku Anyway, I cam way back here to tell you: on my dream sequence limerick, that was totally invented. I started doing a limerick for the contest: Last Night I dreamt, and that is the weird thing I came up with. I have to apologize. I am not fond of it. But I am glad if you enjoyed it. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2012 at 9:11 PM

GREAT job with this one. ME LIKES a lot.

Barbara Gorelick

November 28, 2010 at 6:48 PM

I see you are a limerick specialist..some really good ones! BG

James Fraser

February 11, 2010 at 3:14 PM

Kool title Duke, great Beatles track >> James

Jeralynn Clark

January 30, 2010 at 7:32 AM

Love it!!! Jeralynn

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2010 at 6:46 AM

Welcome to soup if I have not told you before. LOL did you meet the "Old Man and The Sea" along the way. Keep the laughter flowing for we need it here at soup. Sara