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A Date With Our Fate

One hundred years from now as we record our past deeds and hang them in the dark corridors of history will we wash the blood from our hands gather the armies, bring out their bands or carry the sorrows of mankind that drips from our veins, crawls like a vine tomorrow we'll say, there will be peace reality shows, death always feasts expectations on wings are what our mouths bring time has revealed it's war our heart's sing greed and corruption weaves through our souls as blood falls from our fingers, calloused and cold "I AM HERE" is what we scream, for all to hear as we stare into the heavens, with disgust and sneers for we are sick, hate grows in our heart it cripples our soul and all of its part tomorrow we'll cease and be no more we're a blemish of nature, an open sore hope always reigns for the last minute stay some will cry out, "save us from fate" the cries will be heard ages to late winds will blow the dust from the plains revealing scattered footprints left in the hard clay 5/20/18 contest In 100 Years

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Date: 6/15/2018 10:04:00 AM
Well penned, Frederic. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/14/2018 5:54:00 PM
makes me so glad I won't be around Frederic! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2018 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Frederic!
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Date: 6/13/2018 8:04:00 PM
Darkness has come to consume our land! Great write my friend I thoroughly enjoyed reading your entry into my contest and congrats on your placement
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Date: 5/22/2018 3:13:00 PM
A dark portrait of man's mistakes and the outcomes that seem inevitable. Truly, we are asking to be saved from ourselves, but can the reigns of mercy stretch that far? Provocative write, Frederick. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2018 3:13:00 PM
You did some gorgeous writing on this theme. Amazing!!
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:07:00 AM
Touching poem Frederic
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:04:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...an epic write Frederic, very well crafted with music...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:39:00 PM
- Dark future ... glad I will not experience it - Luck in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2018 2:04:00 PM
Your poem has a sad angst to it, which you portray so very well. Man is marred by sin and hate, and only a Savior can help us before it’s too late...well done and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/20/2018 1:50:00 PM
Very good! I like the “footprints left in the hard clay”
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