Home » Poems » Michael J. Falotico » "a Dangerous Ride"

"a Dangerous Ride"

You came in like a sweet tasty tornado.. Spun my head around where I didn't know where to go.. The path of destruction was paved with lust and misplaced feelings.. Two wrongs only made another wrong which led to months of healing.. The funnel cloud came in so fast but I know I kept it spinning.. I was tossed aside left hurt and broken, but had a smile that was still grinning.. Next time I know to check the forecast and maybe stay inside.. To spin that way again may not be such a pleasant ride...

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2011 1:25:00 PM

lol.. yes i remeber this one. Love the first line. I guess I was snooping and the title drew me in again. by the way I love what takes me on that special feeling ride. ~Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2010 3:32:00 PM

wow! what a tornado,,, wee she must had been a perfect 7,, i mean category 7,, yes Michael, lets stay inside when the forecast is bad,, I myself have to keep inside when them earthquakes are out to break me... lol.. really love this one,,, what a twist,,, p.d.

M.I.A .

Date: 11/21/2010 5:54:00 PM

Hahahhaha, but the ride must be worth it! I believe there's a saying after 2 mistakes the right answer came. not really sure myself but it sounds passable >,<

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2010 4:00:00 PM

Great writing Michael, your poetry is always a delight to read >> James

Mark Fullick

Date: 11/21/2010 9:06:00 AM

The power of another soul that can do this to a person is truly fantastic. I knew a woman like this once and I live for this ride a second time..O no misplaced feelings though every one accounted for, and the ones she took with her I would gladly loose again to see her whirll wind tornado self just once more. Lovely thank you for sharing

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/21/2010 8:04:00 AM

Clever write Mr. F, enjoyed your comparisons in this one.. And then he says it come from a twisted head.. I dont think so.. ;) Love Wilma

Verlecia Fields

Date: 11/21/2010 6:21:00 AM

Thank you for the comment on my poem "Wallpapered, Soloed Nudity"> I have a grin on my face right now! Your poem made me feel alive and wanting to ride one more time that tornado, and to see if it would toss me off softer the next time around. Great way to make a woman smile! This poem has great feeling and it moves the ground with passion!