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A Creole Townhouse


I visited New Orleans years before hurricane Katrina where hundreds were killed and
eighty percent of the city was flooded.  I saw the Mardi Gras Parade, I listened to
jazz music on Bourbon Street and I took a tour of the French Quarter, the Vieux
Carre, the oldest and most unique neighbourhood in New Orleans.  I saw lots of 
great architecture, unique treasures, but I was drawn to the Creole townhouses.

courtyards and arcades
balconies with steep pitched roofs
speaks of history

There was one townhouse dripping with green that touched my soul.  It spoke to me
of the struggle and poverty and racial strife and of the vibrant history of this old city.
The falling foliage spoke of great pride and was exquisite to behold, so picturesque.
Timeless was the beauty, alive and reflective of history. After Katrina, I worried for
this house of beauty, but I heard that, The Quarter suffered relatively little damage
from flooding, although some were damaged from wind. Oh what became of that
beautiful townhouse?  I wish I knew.

oh did brick save you
you were high above the sea
do the plants still drip

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December 29, 2015

Haibun

For the contest, A House In New Orleans, sponsor, Lin Lane

Third Place
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Poem

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A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Broken, I am here to make the best of my smile, since I can't write real poetry. LINDA
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 11:11 AM
You are welcome
La France Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Your forever support it appreciate !
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Wonderful win. LINDA
La France Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Linda, thanks for the visit and the wonderful !
Inman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Nicely crafted haibun, BW, and a great story.
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:16 PM
James, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Garg Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Very well penned Haibun dear BW, congratulations on your WIN......
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:18 PM
and the congratulations !
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Archana, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Broken..
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the wonderful !
George   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Wonderful Haibun, dear Constance. Many congrats on your will deserved win. Sincerely, Elaine
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Elaine, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, so appreciated !
Gentry Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting imagery!
La France Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment !
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:09 PM
You must have spent a long time on research Broken Wings many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs, yes I did, hours of research went into this write ~
Lane Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, BW. Thanks for entering.
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Lin, thanks for a great contest and my wonderful placement, honored !
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement! Full of beauty..*smiles* -luloo
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrat, the beauty and the smiles !
Karim Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:28 PM
I love the title of this amazing poem. I am also interested in Creole History! Great write!
La France Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Ayesha, thank you for the amazing, I did tons of research to do this poem, I pray the sponsor likes it ~
Sage Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 4:24 AM
Beautiful poem....I'd like to know what happened to the house, so if you happen to find out....and good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Shehu, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful, I guess I have to go back to New Orleans and search for the house to find out ~
Shahein Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Lol , One great line ..loved it...hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:38 PM
Dalia, thanks for visiting, but there is more to come, stay tuned ~
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