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A Crave For Elation

Perhaps I dream. Or live in some stupor, dreading hallucinations. Why can’t I have Iridescent reveries? Perhaps it’s all in the mind, The aptitude of what I don’t require. But it is not what I want. I want to be in heaven, to feel the ecstasy of love. It matters not if I am happy or sad, feel a well being or a pain, I only yearn for an euphoria that's hard to define. I wake covered in sickly sweat, I feel reality but alas the dream ebbs into oblivion, and there only remains an inexplicable crave. 12 Januuary 2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2022 10:14:00 AM

I found another upon which I had not read and commented upon. They say that love releases feel good hormones which is a good thing, but it also connects the lovers in a special way, but I think some people lack that hormone. LOL.. You being so supportive of my work also makes me feel good. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/16/2021 7:35:00 PM

I too want to be in heaven, but not yet Victor. We both know it is not our choice. Sweetly penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:56:00 PM

Splendid writing, Victor. I hope you get all you dream of.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:56:00 PM

(but I do not want you to die!!) Well, let me go first!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2021 11:38:00 AM

I only yearn for euphoria! I hope you find it in buckets (plenty of it!)

Peter Dome

Date: 1/13/2021 7:48:00 AM

i'm the same Victor. A kid in a sweetshop without a penny. take care. Pete.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/13/2021 1:23:00 AM

Nothing we can do but wait my friend. Jesus said," Abide until I come." A fine write victor. God Bless, JB

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2021 9:28:00 PM

Hi Victor, Dreams help to endure all this madness around us. I crave that euphoric place( heaven) as well. Excellent thought provoking write, my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/12/2021 8:09:00 PM

Bliss is waiting for those who love Jesus. Your beautiful poem describes the longing for it very capably. :=)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/12/2021 9:35:00 AM

thought provoking piece Victor, You will be reunited with your loved ones but until then continue to write you beautiful poetry for us:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2021 6:19:00 AM

Keep dreaming my friend--the hints of euphoria suggest a way to heaven. You speak eloquently, Victor, for many who explore such thoughts in reveries.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2021 5:44:00 AM

- It is difficult to enjoy life on earth and long for heaven - at the same time, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2021 4:22:00 AM

We all want that something better and our earthly existence can't alway give us what we crave for, we have to be patient and wait for the next life to give us that better life. Tom

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/12/2021 4:17:00 AM

Heaven will be pure love, I believe. God bless you always, Victor