A Crave For Elation

Perhaps I dream.
Or live in some stupor,
dreading hallucinations.
Why can’t I have
Iridescent reveries?
Perhaps it’s all in the mind,	
The aptitude of what I don’t require.

But it is not what I want.
I want to be in heaven,
to feel the ecstasy of love.
It matters not if I am happy or sad,
feel a well being or a pain,
I only yearn for an euphoria
that's hard to define.
 
I wake covered in sickly sweat,
I feel reality but alas
the dream ebbs into oblivion,
and there only remains
an inexplicable crave.

12 Januuary 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 10:14 AM
I found another upon which I had not read and commented upon. They say that love releases feel good hormones which is a good thing, but it also connects the lovers in a special way, but I think some people lack that hormone. LOL.. You being so supportive of my work also makes me feel good. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 7:35 PM
I too want to be in heaven, but not yet Victor. We both know it is not our choice. Sweetly penned.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:56 PM
(but I do not want you to die!!) Well, let me go first!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Splendid writing, Victor. I hope you get all you dream of.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:38 AM
I only yearn for euphoria! I hope you find it in buckets (plenty of it!)
Dome Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 7:48 AM
i'm the same Victor. A kid in a sweetshop without a penny. take care. Pete.
Ball Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Nothing we can do but wait my friend. Jesus said," Abide until I come." A fine write victor. God Bless, JB
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Hi Victor, Dreams help to endure all this madness around us. I crave that euphoric place( heaven) as well. Excellent thought provoking write, my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Bliss is waiting for those who love Jesus. Your beautiful poem describes the longing for it very capably. :=)
Allison Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:35 AM
thought provoking piece Victor, You will be reunited with your loved ones but until then continue to write you beautiful poetry for us:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Keep dreaming my friend--the hints of euphoria suggest a way to heaven. You speak eloquently, Victor, for many who explore such thoughts in reveries.
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 5:44 AM
- It is difficult to enjoy life on earth and long for heaven - at the same time, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 4:22 AM
We all want that something better and our earthly existence can't alway give us what we crave for, we have to be patient and wait for the next life to give us that better life. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Heaven will be pure love, I believe. God bless you always, Victor
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