A COLD WINTERs STEAMY

The staticky-stars climax under intense blanket of Winter glow.
Your spouse can’t see your spirited green eyes that burn slow.

The friction of campfire sticks, the satiny slipperiness of moon.
Flames of blue, orange and red won’t be overcome too soon.

Pert rose petals, that once were goosebumpy and ice cold,
scintillate like fireworks until the grand finale’s loosed, uncontrolled.

Warm breath in a cold Winter’s steamy and a restless beast.
Lips lavish over late night feast, matches singe, sate increased.

Squirming under the leisurely complement of coals, coalescing,
Coolness of a blue lake vaingloriously countering, distressing.

A long midnight’s thrashing, sans pillory; the high beams foray.
Pillow talk, a sensuous squeeze, a high-diving elixir bouquet.

Ah those stars brilliantly glowing on a long Winter’s night!
Those limbs blush, rose petals crush, with unfettered light.

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Date: 3/25/2024 11:30:00 AM
I can feel the joy of crawling under a cool comforter on a winter night. You capture that delight well in a cold, steamy night. Loved it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Triny!
Date: 3/13/2024 7:03:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in the Open Poetry Contest. So many imaginative word combinations along with "pillow talk" tucked into a cold winter's restlessness. Be well. Brian
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Brian! Blessings!
Date: 3/11/2024 5:47:00 PM
A fav of mine- congrats- this is simply, beautiful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 5:58:00 PM
I appreciate you, always! Hugs!
Date: 3/11/2024 12:50:00 PM
Dear Kim, your brilliant steamy romantic imagery is as enamoring as it is enticing! A sensual fiesta of " staticky-stars" and "satiny slipperiness" - wow! Intimate, euphoric verse captures the furnace burning on a cold Winter's night. A celebration of love and lust! Congratulations for your win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 2:04:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Susan! :)
Date: 3/11/2024 8:43:00 AM
kim, this was a real treat to read, and it had everything - unusual word combos, internal and end rhyme, wordplay (i love "coals, coalescing"); the opening and closing lines are very strong, and i like that you've written the poem in couplets, which is very fitting for the intimate, sensual subject matter - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2024 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 3/10/2024 1:12:00 PM
I'm going to ditto Tom in saying 'Belated congratulations on your potd honors,' Kim. Your poetry is always on par with being recognized for its quality.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2024 1:16:00 PM
Thank youo much! I appreciate that, Lin!
Date: 3/10/2024 12:49:00 AM
Belated congratulations to you Kim on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 3/9/2024 5:48:00 PM
Hey, Kim, Congrats on a well-deserved POTD for this image-laden masterpiece. Twinkling Lights, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 3/9/2024 4:47:00 PM
A terrific poem, Kim! Congratulations on POTD honors. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 3/9/2024 1:26:00 PM
Warm breath, midnight thrashing and limbs that blush while being under an intense blanket of Winter glow. Sounds a little steamy to me. :) The images you create are beyond breathtaking, Kim. This is beautiful, playful and poetic, all at the same time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:58:00 PM
I appreciate your comment very much! Thank you, Brandy! Hugs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2024 3:23:00 PM
You know me so well. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2024 3:04:00 PM
I thought you might like this one :)
Date: 3/9/2024 12:50:00 PM
Fabulous POTD, Kim. Grandissimo! All the best.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:58:00 PM
“Grandissimi!” Thank you, Gina! xx
Date: 3/9/2024 11:24:00 AM
Kim the diction you used in this poem, is refreshing and unique. It made your poem such a delightful read. I squirmed with the slipperiness of your words and they gave me goose-bumps CONGRATULATIONS on POTD. Somebody choosing POTD's got it right.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:59:00 PM
Love your comment! Thank you, dear S.V.!
Date: 3/9/2024 11:10:00 AM
Very nicely penne Kim, Congrats on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 3/9/2024 10:14:00 AM
A carnival of colors, imagery, and emotions. I loved it, Kim, a FAV for my list. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for faving, Bill! I am honored!
Date: 3/9/2024 9:47:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD. Well deserved
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:01:00 PM
Thank you I.E.!
Date: 3/9/2024 8:42:00 AM
Wow..Great writing Kim! Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 3/9/2024 8:32:00 AM
After a day of boating, skiing or fishing, on the lake, there is a steamy night ahead. The imagery & "Warm breath in a cold Winter’s steamy and a restless beast. Lips lavish over late night feast, matches singe, sate increased." an aphrodisiac for a steamy night at the lake. Congratulations on your POTD Kim Rodrigues! Colorful couplets. Enjoy your day! Hugs :)~Anaya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you! Love your comment, Anaya! xx
Date: 3/9/2024 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Date: 3/9/2024 7:01:00 AM
Kim, so wonderfully descriptive-Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Warren!
Date: 3/9/2024 6:55:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Kim. Enjoy your special day today.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/9/2024 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely story/write. I love the bright stars at night. Enjoy your day with your wonderful win.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! xx
Date: 3/9/2024 6:13:00 AM
Very sensual write Kim Steamy winter's nights are always welcome. ;) Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Linda :)
Date: 3/9/2024 6:08:00 AM
Kim, beautiful, congratulations on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 3/9/2024 5:53:00 AM
Whew! This night spent under the stars (or wherever they found themselves) won't soon be forgotten. Nice POTD Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:06:00 PM
Truly! :) Thank you, Tom!
Date: 3/9/2024 5:14:00 AM
Dear Kim, A cold winters steamy is a beautifully penned poem. Congratulations on it's recognition as POTD! "Lips lavish over late night feast", "coals, coalescing, coolness", The word choices in this alliteration is so pleasing to one's earl.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2024 6:07:00 PM
Glad you loved the word choices! Smiling! Thank you!
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