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I've tried to fight the doldrums with my mind and ready wit. But all I've gleaned is a yawn, and a real desire to quit. I've finished scratching my butt, tending to an award itch. And stare down at a blank page, writing poems is a . Maybe I'll try something new, and write about what I see. But, one look around this place, shows little to inspire me. All I see are dust bunnies and a cat that won't sit still. Ah, shoot, there goes his food dish, shall I write about the spill? There once was a clumsy cat that didn't notice the wax. And sliding into his dish, he was stopped dead in his tracks. On second thought, maybe not, it lacks that ring of appeal. For it's too silly, and I'm not sure how the cat would feel. (Quatrain) 7/21/2017

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Date: 3/19/2018 10:55:00 PM
A fun read. I love your last line - it is so clever! Charming, Emile.
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Date: 8/6/2017 6:59:00 PM
"Indignant" - They have this "Whoa" what just happened there look - Then they walk off with a "Lets pretend that didn't happen" look - ha ha ha - Or an even worst look when he finds out you have just been writing about his latest "Indignation" - "Beware of the avenaging cat" But that is another story - Witty little soul you "Emile" - Made us all laugh and smile at the thought of it - Lovely - Indiana x x x
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Date: 8/7/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Indiana, your comments are truly welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2017 10:27:00 AM
such a catchy poem so wittily scribed.. how refreshing to read you today, emile... huggs
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, your comments are truly welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2017 11:07:00 PM
I love the verse, Emile, we all feel the same emotions.. then see the humor in other things like the cat running into the dish, except mine is my yorkie sliding when is going after his toy.... Enjoyed. Eve ~*
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Date: 7/23/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve, you comments are always a joy to read my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/21/2017 5:36:00 PM
Great humour you made me smile Emile I think my muse has been on holiday with yours... but this witty poem proves yours is back and firing on all cylinders:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Jan, Muses can be such fickle beings.... as always your comments are most welcome and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/21/2017 5:20:00 PM
LOL I enjoy seeing your humor Emile. Another good one . Cute :)
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Date: 7/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, as always your comments are most welcome and appreciated my friend, Emile.

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