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A Christmas Wish

I wish I could go back to the past,
of Christmases long ago.
I wish I could see my loved ones
who have passed on long ago.

I'd love to be that child again
who sat on Santa's knee.
Yes, all these memories that I have
decorating the tree.
   
I wish I could wake Christmas morn
to see daddy baking ham.
And to see my mamma making her yummy
famous candy yams.

I wish I could go to Grandma's house;
her cookies were the best.
The pies and cakes that she would bake,
she kept them in a chest.

Her house would smell like ginger,
with a hint of Balsam Pine.
She'd decorate the house with lights,
and it would surely shine.

All these Christmas memories,
it seems like yesteryear.
I'd love to go back to the past.
This is my Christmas prayer


''X'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
              ~2nd place ~

Published  December 2018
https://familyfriendpoems.com/poem/122207
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kgaswane Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 11:36 PM
Hello Debra?? It's a lovely poem about Christmas, it does evoke the special emotions one has about Christmas. Thanks.
Schiavina Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations Debra on winning poem also featured on Poetry Soup Home Page.
George Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 7:50 PM
This is exactly my wish too on every festive occasion, especially Christmas, to be a child once again and be with my siblings and parents! Love this poem, Debra !
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Your words are very true... When we were kids, we had the most wonderful Christmas memories. Everyone we care about was present. As we become older, those people pass away, and we begin to miss the individuals we care about around this time of year. Hugs ~ Debra
Cox Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 4:39 PM
I enjoyed this poem. We'd all like to go back and relive the past and check out the memories. Dave
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Yes!.. I agree, it would be nice to spend sometime with those who have past on. What fun that would be . I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Happy New Year ~ Debra
Bambi The Word Artist  Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Thanks for the memories you brought to life with your beautiful poem. I love the picture too. Christmas is upon us I am so happy I found your poem. Cal Bambi
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Cal, You are to kind with your words. May you have a Merry Christmas. Debra
Horsman Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Love the memories, love the poetry.
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thank you Harry for your encouragement, I happy you enjoyed th poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 10:42 AM
My belated congrats on your poem. I did not enter. Christmas reminds me too much of my late wife. But yours is a lovely poem.
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Victor, for your encouragement. I'm very sorry for your lost. ~ Debra
Mcconnell Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Such a lovely Christmas piece telling so well of Christmas of the past Debra, really enjoyed this with good rhyme and flow bringing the past back to life. Blessings always,Gordon
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Thank You Gordon, for your encouragement, Christmas Blessings ~ Debbie
Jayasankar Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 12:19 AM
Such beautiful Christmas memories dear Debra...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 5:15 PM
Thank You Anitha, for your encouragement...Blessings ~ Debra
La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Debra, wonderful poem and congratulations on your Second Place Win in my "X" (Xmas) New/Old Contest, I really like the image used ~ love and serenity _Constance
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:16 PM
Thank you ! Constance, I'm very humbled that have chosen my poem. Blessing ~ Debra
Daniel Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:04 AM
A lovely poem recalling those lovely memories of the past, Debra:)
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thank You Jo, I happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
M  Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 12:16 AM
Your poem is so so sweet Debra…..makes me miss the Christmas excitement you have when a child!! Well done . Debx
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:26 PM
Thank You Deb, I glad you enjoyed this poem. Blessings ~ Debbie
Baker Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 10:07 PM
Lovely memories of past Christmas's in this poem Debra. It brought back a lot of memories of past Christmas's I've enjoyed. Merry Christmas! ( I know it's early, someone had to say it first ) :-) A poet friend, Bill
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Thank You Bill, I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Merry Christmas, I hope you will be able to make alot more memories. ~ Debra
Deo Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 6:06 AM
U have them, always. So if we take care of our health / memory, we can go back & forth, and multiply the joys . Amen
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Always cherish the memories. Thank You, Anil...Blessings ~ Debra
Wolf Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 7:03 PM
So sweet, innocent, and genuine. Perhaps as you pass these golden memories on to your loved ones, you can relive the thrills and wonder. Very special penning, Debra. Season's greetings, Gershon
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Thank You Gershon, for the kind words and the encouragement. Season's greetings, Debra
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Wonderful memories. I can see why you would like to experience that as it is again. Well written :)
Brown Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:15 PM
Thank Heidi, out of all the poems I have written this is my favorite. Blessings ~ Debbie
Mcintosh Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Lovely write. Love Christmas and have so many amazing memories. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Brown Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Thank Regina for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debbie
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