A Christmas Snow

A Christmas Snow

In the distance I hear them, 
Through the snow capped hills beyond the icy river below...
The voices are a delight to the ears...

I smile in spite of the cold...

I run and stumble, a cascade of snow quickly swallows me whole...
I race toward the magical sounds that fill the brisk air....

I smile in spite of the cold...

As I catch my breath I gaze intently...
A sight so amazing, so incredible, I freeze in place...
The brilliant snowflakes delicately fall gently across my face...

I smile in spite of the cold...

Set into the white washed hills is a lit city of sorts...
Raised above the blanket of snow... 
Made entirely of ice crystal are the houses of old...

I smile in spite of the cold...

I gasp... as I am blinded by the scene that lay before me...
Singing with angelic voices are children with rosy cheeks...
They are serene and blissful so full of light...

I smile in spite of the cold...


For the Christmas Snow Contest
By: Meg Anderson
12-1-14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 26, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Yes it was refreshing Meg, thank you so much for the reply...LINDA
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:02 PM
MEG, Congratulations on your awesome "*Christmas Snow*" win. Luv ~LINDA~
Anderson Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Linda! This was refreshing to write. Meg
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Beautiful imagery and I love the repeating line! Congrats on a great win, Meg!! Hugs, Rhonda
Anderson Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Rhonda, thank you. This was my first contest and it was fun. Meg
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 2:33 AM
congrats on win hugs
Anderson Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Thank you.
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:46 PM
I enjoyed the imagery with a smile, congratulations on the win, Meg
Anderson Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Thank you. I had fun writing this.
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 7:38 AM
I, too enjoy repeating lines, and thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem.
Anderson Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Cona, awe thank you! It feels more complete with repeated lines. Thanks for reading.
Vaso Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:46 PM
I smile at this lovely poem! I smile at this lovely poem!
Anderson Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Well thank you. Your words are kind.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Wonderful imagery meg and I love the repeated line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Anderson Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Awe thanks Jan. I enjoy repeating lines, its my favorite thing to do. It just doesn't feel right without it.
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