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A Christmas Snow

A Christmas Snow In the distance I hear them, Through the snow capped hills beyond the icy river below... The voices are a delight to the ears... I smile in spite of the cold... I run and stumble, a cascade of snow quickly swallows me whole... I race toward the magical sounds that fill the brisk air.... I smile in spite of the cold... As I catch my breath I gaze intently... A sight so amazing, so incredible, I freeze in place... The brilliant snowflakes delicately fall gently across my face... I smile in spite of the cold... Set into the white washed hills is a lit city of sorts... Raised above the blanket of snow... Made entirely of ice crystal are the houses of old... I smile in spite of the cold... I gasp... as I am blinded by the scene that lay before me... Singing with angelic voices are children with rosy cheeks... They are serene and blissful so full of light... I smile in spite of the cold... For the Christmas Snow Contest By: Meg Anderson 12-1-14

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Date: 4/26/2015 4:47:00 PM
Yes it was refreshing Meg, thank you so much for the reply...LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:02:00 PM
MEG, Congratulations on your awesome "*Christmas Snow*" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/26/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Linda! This was refreshing to write. Meg
Date: 12/22/2014 12:16:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and I love the repeating line! Congrats on a great win, Meg!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/22/2014 7:01:00 AM
Rhonda, thank you. This was my first contest and it was fun. Meg
Date: 12/13/2014 2:33:00 AM
congrats on win hugs
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Date: 12/13/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/12/2014 8:46:00 PM
I enjoyed the imagery with a smile, congratulations on the win, Meg
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/12/2014 9:15:00 PM
Thank you. I had fun writing this.
Date: 12/11/2014 7:38:00 AM
I, too enjoy repeating lines, and thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem.
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Date: 12/11/2014 7:41:00 AM
Cona, awe thank you! It feels more complete with repeated lines. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/5/2014 8:46:00 PM
I smile at this lovely poem! I smile at this lovely poem!
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:39:00 PM
Well thank you. Your words are kind.
Date: 12/1/2014 5:39:00 PM
Wonderful imagery meg and I love the repeated line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 6:03:00 PM
Awe thanks Jan. I enjoy repeating lines, its my favorite thing to do. It just doesn't feel right without it.

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