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A Christmas Memory-Contest

Matching pj's, rainbow colored tinsel with LED lights, Gazing, disbelief as the pine slowly declines onto the floor, We all laugh with silliness while grammy has fallen beneath it, There the tree lies while the naughty kitty chaotically explores. Written By: Laura Urbaniak Date: November 20, 2015 For the contest, A Christmas Memory, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2015 6:06:00 PM

Oh so funny, Laura, congratulations on your win!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/2/2015 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/2/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thanks Nayda :)-lu *smiles*

Dan Cwiak

Date: 12/1/2015 4:22:00 PM

Reminds me of a Christmas memory I only speculated about, and will have to find. Congrats on the win, Laura. Gave me a smile.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Dan :) *smiles*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2015 3:46:00 PM

haha, reminds me of Grandma got run over by a reindeer kind of tale. Congrats with your humorous little memory.

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :) *smiles*

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2015 1:09:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your Christmas Memory win. Luv **SKAT**

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 1:30:00 PM

Thank you very much SKAT :)-lu

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2015 12:39:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 1:29:00 PM

Thank you again Jan:)-lu *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2015 11:53:00 AM

- It is rare that I participate in anyone contest ...... however, this was so nice - Many great and some sad memories we shared - Congratulations with your poems, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise :) I appreciate your kind review:) -lu *smiles*

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/1/2015 8:17:00 AM

Congrats Laura for the placement. AnishaD

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you Anisha :)-lu *smiles*

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/1/2015 3:39:00 AM

So it was the cat that was celebrating!! Congrats Laura on your placement!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 12:28:00 PM

Yes! that darn cat had the last laugh! And poor grammy! But she was perfectly fine, no broken hip! *Smiles*-lu

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/1/2015 1:46:00 AM

You can't beat a Christmas happy disaster, Laura. Well done. Viv x

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thanks Viv, it was hilarious :) -lu *Smiles*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/30/2015 11:48:00 PM

Lovely memory with so much humour.. beautifully penned Laura.. congrats on big win!

Lu Loo
Date: 12/1/2015 12:26:00 PM

It was very funny! Thanks -lu *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2015 1:57:00 PM

- Fun, Christmas memory :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) .... Luck in contest !

Lu Loo
Date: 11/21/2015 4:06:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne Lise :)-*smiles*

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2015 11:42:00 AM

This charming poem will place well - Broken Wings loves cats - great write Laura:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 11/20/2015 1:05:00 PM

Thank you Jan very much :) Have a great day!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2015 11:26:00 AM

This poem is so charming. I love cats and the photo included inhances your words wonderfully! I hope to see this on the winner's list! I think it is a great entry!

Lu Loo
Date: 11/20/2015 1:05:00 PM

Thank you Connie!! :) -lu xx *smiles*