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A Child's World

The glorious mornings came not for you Yet, brown eyes of yours claim them as treasure For you alone suns rise and fall in blue To show the world your silhouette's measure Giving your soul to its days brighter cause You bind your heart to this circling orb Told the red sky to make the evenings pause Chastised the darkness when light was absorbed Given your joy for the light of the day The times you cursed the dull gray with its rain I let you run long in meadows and play From this my son it's my heart you sustain Let your joyous soul find sun's precious light I'll hold your tired body 'til sleep at night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/18/2016 1:40:00 AM
Frederic, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:00:00 AM
Interesting to read this poem, every word has an impact to joyfully reminisce every single moment of your son, Frederic. Congrats on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/12/2014 6:07:00 PM
Our childhood is a precious time that goes by so fast, and every moment should be cherished and lived to the fullest. This is such a beautiful and tender poem, Frederic. I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/12/2014 8:11:00 PM
thank you Kelly, it was written from memory as both my sons are grown men now
Date: 5/11/2014 2:13:00 AM
Frederic, Thank you for everything, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Have yourself a wonderful night, and a beautiful mother's days.... (enjoy my latest blog if you like) xox~ Linda"
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Date: 4/30/2014 9:41:00 PM
nothing can be as compassionate and loving to a child than this loving, flawless piece, frederick.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/1/2014 9:08:00 AM
nothing is more innocent or precious than a child, as my wife says they never asked to be here
Date: 1/24/2014 7:08:00 AM
Wow...This is an incredible piece written here. I may have to get back into writing rhymes. Awesome my friend.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/24/2014 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for reading and the kindness of your comment
Date: 1/22/2014 11:42:00 PM
Very impressive write. I have to see more of what you have.
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:01:00 PM
what an endearing poem, Frederic. It is a sonnet, you know. You should call it sonnet! And a good one at that!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/21/2014 8:01:00 PM
yes I know, and you are correct, thank you for reading
Date: 1/21/2014 3:21:00 PM
Frederic, a very delicate write. I love the following imagery. It is very glorious for any child. Nicely written.... SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/21/2014 6:00:00 PM
thank you Skat really enjoyed your poem with poet destroyer
Date: 1/21/2014 3:18:00 PM
ha ha thank you for the comment.
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