A Child's Memory of the Sea

I still remember the first time I saw the sea
I was yet a child of maybe two or three
I have heard of the vastness of such a place filled with water
And I could not wait to see for myself this place of wonder

It was during some holidays 
The whole family was going to spend some time by the sea
Some time to relax, to smile, to forget about their hays
And I, greatly loved and pampered, was in total ecstasy

Wow, how comforting felt the sand when I walked into it
How big seemed the sea itself
How dangerous seemed the waves, they took away my breath
So scared was I that I even refused to enjoy on the sunny beach, the sun's treat

In my young mind, the sea was a danger
With one swirly wave, it would easily swipe me under
The sea would then control me
As if it was that which did overpower me

Still a child, I did then wonder about who could have made such a creation
Faced with the sea, I could only be in a state of submission
The sea is but the home of the fish
For me it was but the place where the skies and the waters clash

The whole family did enjoy a dip in the water
I sat in a shadowy place, somewhere safer
A white crab did walk by my feet
I looked at it, in dumb silence, hoping, that it would not bite

I then wondered if the sea was not a big blue jelly
A sort of thing with a texture made of beauty
Maybe if I was a giant, I could eat it with a spoon
Maybe, yes, maybe then, dangerous would it not seem to be!

A giant if I was, I would have swam
I would have walked, not scared of being swallowed
Not scared of drowning, a giant conquering the whole sea
A giant, walking around, with a hungry stomach and a big spoon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Congratulations on the win here Anoucheka quite an imaginative piece..'
A   Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Well done. nice win. LINDA
A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 10:20 AM
wonderful....skat
Relish Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 2:01 AM
The awe and excitement of a child is well described... congrats on your win... nad
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 12:06 PM
what wonderful memories - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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