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A Child's First Home

On a rural country road, surrounded by balsam scented pine trees. Was a special place, that I felt inside, was always meant for me. It was an old rustic farm house, that showed her age, throughout the years. If you walked on her arthritic floors, squeaky sounds, is what you'd hear. Fruit trees of apple, pears, and cherry always gave us treats. You had to pick them early, cause those outdoor critters, love to eat. The smell of warm baked apple pie was always lingering in the air. Grandma was always cooking, and grandpa sat, in his lazy chair. We had a red brick fireplace that kept us warm at night. And roasted tasty marshmallows, satisfying our sugary appetite. I can still see our cat Frisky meowing to get out. He had a special friend, they played together, and ran about. The Sunday family dinners that are now my memories, Were cherished special moments, that will always, stay with me. I remember sitting and rocking, on that front porch swing. Enjoying the lovely sounds, that the blue birds bring. Every once in a while, I take a deep breath, as I go by that old house. Thoughts flood my head, and my heart pours out. Oh father time please take me to a place, I once belonged. A special place, that meant so much a place, that I call home. 9/6/2015 Contest sponsored by Verlena S Walker. A child's first home.

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Date: 10/22/2015 1:19:00 PM
Michael, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/23/2015 3:01:00 AM
thank you Skat
Date: 10/21/2015 8:53:00 AM
Great poem, Michael! Its well-written, descriptive lines take me back to a little house that meant so much to me many years ago! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/23/2015 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 10/20/2015 4:15:00 PM
Hi Michael! I truly enjoyed this poem; had to read it again, just for the pleasure of savouring its lovely images that please the senses. A home to remember...and miss! Congrats on a fine win! ~ Regards // paul
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/20/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Paul. The feelings and thoughts we carry through the rest of our lives. A home is a special place, it was for me. Stay well my friend and thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/18/2015 7:50:00 AM
Your work drawers me in x It's realistic x and good x wendy
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2015 8:21:00 PM
Thank you Wendy for your kind thoughts.
Date: 10/7/2015 6:38:00 PM
I love this poem. You were a lucky boy growing up.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 4:14:00 AM
Thanks Joan.
Date: 9/8/2015 1:08:00 AM
Know the sentiment of this nostalgic poem. You reminded me to write about my grandmother's house, which was the house that stayed the same for me as my parents moved so much! Now I'm back where I can drive by that house. It's bitter sweet. It's moved on in time and holds different memories for other children now. The house is the same and yet very different. This was lovely Mike. Evokes a lot of emotions. I love the arthritic floors! Know them well!
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/8/2015 1:28:00 AM
We all have that attachment Edlynn to a special place. You drive by and you start reminiscing about your time there and your family. Please write about your grandmothers house. I would love to read it. Thank you for your appreciated comments.
Date: 9/6/2015 9:41:00 PM
Michael, your poem is so heartwarming and beautiful with emotion, love it and thanks for visiting my river poem ~~
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/6/2015 10:05:00 PM
Your welcome. I always enjoy reading your poems...
Date: 9/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
What wonderful vivid memories Michael:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan. they were, nice memories.xx
Date: 9/6/2015 2:11:00 PM
very nice, home is where the heart is they say i rememebr trying to run away from home i was only 3 years old, trying to escape 2 of my sisters not being nice to me, childhood was not so good but i believe God will restore my years the locusts ate away Amen
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/6/2015 3:34:00 PM
Amen Diane thanks for your kind comments. He was always with you. Sorry about your sisters. time has a way of healing...

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