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Each afternoon my mom and I would walk Two miles along the old lake road to meet My siblings' bus, and all the way we'd talk How dear, the meager things ... She'd tutor me with lines that I'd repeat A special verse by rote, (tho' I would balk) So thus by Friday eve I'd know, complete Another sonnet I could proudly mock These lessons lasted only 'til we'd greet My sibs, on the return trip we took stock Of all the nature, bright and bittersweet How dear, the meager things ... I so enjoyed those little walks each day That aged lake road with forest canopy I'll always hear her voice beside me say How dear, the meager things ... Numberless, the instructions, taught to be The priceless wisdom used along my way While memorizing verse then wearied me It's why I'm now this poet, and to stay Of all life's lessons that I've come to see The one most precious I will ne'er betray My hand in hers, so safe and so care-free ... How dear, the meager things. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge, Feb 2019, Roundel Form" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor. (Syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com)

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Date: 7/10/2021 1:38:00 AM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2019 6:09:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to your lines Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2019 1:31:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Jan, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/7/2019 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Greg. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2019 1:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve, and hugs to you as well! :o) <3
Date: 3/6/2019 5:52:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Roundel~
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2019 1:31:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Constance, this one is special, and I am honored you gave it placement! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 3/6/2019 11:55:00 AM
'Gregory, Congratulations on a well-deserved win!. So very real with perfect walking pace. David :)'
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/10/2019 1:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, David, I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/25/2019 10:09:00 PM
the flow complemented the peaceful stroll. very nice. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/25/2019 11:03:00 PM
That's very kind of you, PS, thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/25/2019 12:51:00 AM
Hi Greg, Nicely done with such a gentle-effortless flow. Best wishes, Anthony
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/25/2019 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Anthony, I greatly appreciate the kind sentiments - I'm pleased that you enjoyed it! Blessings! :-)

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