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Life was so carefree for me as a child, way back when I was just a little girl who loved to dream and pretend that I would grow up to be a doctor's nurse and mend those who were hurt and sick. Their needs I would tend. Way back then when I was ten, my world was small. Dad was the man in my life. In my eyes he stood tall. Working on our farm didn't seem like work at all and when dinner was ready, we'd hear Mom's call. My siblings and I had pets, but Bandi was my favorite one. He'd wag his tail and run with me when my work was done. He was a hunter and cocked his ears when Dad got the gun. Way back then when I was ten, my life was filled with fun. We didn't have a car, but on a farm we needed a truck. When I honked the horn it made the silly chickens cluck. It came in handy hauling our vegetables to earn a buck. We sat in the flatbed when Dad said, "Corn to shuck." I was a bit of a tom boy, never wanted to play with a doll. My sister asked Santa for Barbie; my brother- a basketball. All I wanted was a horse, but Mom was afraid I'd take a fall. I heard a whinny in the morn; the tom boy began to bawl. What few worries I had at ten, when life was so simplistic. Too old to need a babysitter; too young to think of lipstick. I chased lightning bugs at night, taught Bandi his new trick. Those small parts of growing up are good memories that stick. :.............................................................................: January 24th, 2016 Way Back When I Was Ten Contest Sponsored by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:16:00 AM
Great visual through written word. #7
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I really liked this nostalgic trip back in time.
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:28:00 AM
thank you so very much, Susan.
Date: 2/18/2016 7:29:00 AM
Fantastic piece, I loved it.congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 2/18/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rick.
Date: 2/17/2016 9:37:00 AM
Lin, congrats on your top placement! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, and I really like your new avatar.
Date: 2/17/2016 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful memories and great win, Lin!
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:40:00 AM
Well...that jumped at an awkward moment, but thank you, Ralph, and you can keep the hugs! lol
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sandra, for such sweet comments. hugs back
Date: 2/17/2016 9:14:00 AM
Lin, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Wonderful poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sandra, for such sweet comments. hugs back
Date: 2/17/2016 7:22:00 AM
fond memories at age 10 so well done, lin.. big congrats on your shining win!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Nette.
Date: 2/17/2016 5:41:00 AM
We were blessed in comparison to our own children Lin.No peer or media pressure then. congradulations.
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:47:00 AM
You're correct, Jean, and thank you.
Date: 2/17/2016 2:20:00 AM
Your words have created a time machine for my mind to travel to, and see how it was before when you were ten. Congrats Lin, for your well, deserved #1 placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:57:00 AM
Hi, Teddy, and thank you so much for such nice remarks!
Date: 2/17/2016 12:10:00 AM
A lovely, wistful piece, Lin, congrats to you, oh fellow topster. Viv x
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Viv. I'm happy to share with you.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:14:00 PM
Beautiful reminiscing! Congrats on your top win. Janice
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. I appreciate the lovely compliment.
Date: 2/16/2016 9:10:00 PM
Back to say congratulations, Peaches. Well deserved first place.
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thanks very much, Danny.
Date: 2/16/2016 7:33:00 PM
Your poem brought back memories of my own childhood growing up in the country and I was a tomboy too... Congratulations on a first place win with this beautiful poem! Thanks for entering, Lin :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking it so well, Kelly, and for hosting. A trip down memory lane is always fun.
Date: 1/28/2016 9:53:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:26:00 PM
You're so kind, Funom... I thank you very much.
Date: 1/25/2016 5:45:00 PM
Loved this story poem! Recalled growing up on a southern farm.
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:16:00 PM
Hello, Thomas. Thanks for the visit and the kind comments. ;)
Date: 1/25/2016 12:11:00 PM
Love your poem, Lin! What a nice story of your time in life as a ten-year-old. Nicely written, and it should do very well for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. hugs back to you.
Date: 1/24/2016 5:37:00 PM
Lovely poem Lin, lovely memory as well. At that age I was in SC. I wouldn't call us farmers but we had a small subsistence farm with a few chickens, pigs and a huge garden. My mother froze and canned veggies and pickles, and I had a horse.
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Date: 1/24/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, James. We grew mostly vegetables. The main crop was tomatoes - 40,000 plants. When they ripened, it was all day picking and packing, not to mention pruning and tying the bushes up off the ground for months before harvest. I loved it.
Date: 1/24/2016 3:29:00 PM
what a lovely girl you were back then....you're still lovely now too lol..but you've got wonderful memories of age ten, am not sure I can remember any though, I will be tolling 749 on march 57 lol...excellent write Lin, you've done a great write, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:20:00 PM
Oh goodness ~ such sweet comments. You must indeed be a wise sage to have lived for that long! ;)
Date: 1/24/2016 1:43:00 PM
Makes me teary eyed. Wonderful story and well... the rhyming is always a hit with me, especially if it's done tastefully. I like your poem, Lin.
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Date: 1/24/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel. I didn't want to make you teary, but what a nice compliment.

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