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A Carafe of Wine

She was the hub of Christmas time but  
when she got sick, the world they knew fell apart 
The empty freezer hummed void of cookies and tarts, 
as the old tree lay in the shed undecorated and bare. 
In the lobby the doctor gathered her offspring and gave
them the sad news. "Your mom has cancer.  She 
only has a few weeks to live." 

Dust to dust, soon she would be free   
her last words,   
"Don't forget to decorate the tree"  

Tears were kept in check hands were linked  
and souls regrouped.  Only one broke the silence with
a verbal vow. "We are going to remember her, simply"
  
On the first Christmas without her they gathered  
by the old oak table with a carafe of white wine   
and a home made apple pie to die for. Ida who 
had been nicknamed Idaho Potato peeled the   
plastic wrap off the pie just like mom would do*

It was Christmas, mother had taught them
about wine reduction winks and Xmas slips 

There in the center of the table was a puny tree 
holding up a Victorian ornament. The one mom 
had inherited from her mother,  back in 1952;

No throngs of gifts this year 
only her voice humming in their sternums 
keep it simple girls, keep it simple. 

The End. 
Dec. 18, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 18, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Very moving and powerful, Pixie, and just a wonderfully composed write, with all the elements I enjoy in Free Verse. Superb story as well, and a situation we can all relate to. Well-done, my friend!
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December 18, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Excellent as always my friend...
Onclaud Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:10 AM
pixie, nothing less than heart-touching...mothers are forever... huggs
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December 18, 2018 at 9:49 AM
This was beautiful my friend, it touched my heart.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:34 AM
A beautiful heart-felt tribute to a wise mother.
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:32 AM
A very emotional write Pixie,well written. Tom.
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December 18, 2018 at 6:15 AM
Wow. Heartfelt. Many lessons in this vivid story. Love your poem, Pixie.
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