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A Carafe of Wine

She was the hub of Christmas time but when she got sick, the world they knew fell apart The empty freezer hummed void of cookies and tarts, as the old tree lay in the shed undecorated and bare. In the lobby the doctor gathered her offspring and gave them the sad news. "Your mom has cancer. She only has a few weeks to live." Dust to dust, soon she would be free her last words, "Don't forget to decorate the tree" Tears were kept in check hands were linked and souls regrouped. Only one broke the silence with a verbal vow. "We are going to remember her, simply" On the first Christmas without her they gathered by the old oak table with a carafe of white wine and a home made apple pie to die for. Ida who had been nicknamed Idaho Potato peeled the plastic wrap off the pie just like mom would do* It was Christmas, mother had taught them about wine reduction winks and Xmas slips There in the center of the table was a puny tree holding up a Victorian ornament. The one mom had inherited from her mother, back in 1952; No throngs of gifts this year only her voice humming in their sternums keep it simple girls, keep it simple. The End. Dec. 18, 2018

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Date: 12/18/2018 6:41:00 PM
Very moving and powerful, Pixie, and just a wonderfully composed write, with all the elements I enjoy in Free Verse. Superb story as well, and a situation we can all relate to. Well-done, my friend!
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Date: 12/18/2018 2:25:00 PM
Excellent as always my friend...
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Date: 12/18/2018 11:10:00 AM
pixie, nothing less than heart-touching...mothers are forever... huggs
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Date: 12/18/2018 9:49:00 AM
This was beautiful my friend, it touched my heart.
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Date: 12/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
A beautiful heart-felt tribute to a wise mother.
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Date: 12/18/2018 8:32:00 AM
A very emotional write Pixie,well written. Tom.
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Date: 12/18/2018 6:15:00 AM
Wow. Heartfelt. Many lessons in this vivid story. Love your poem, Pixie.
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