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at dawn, I woke to a wet hush, and the roses had a red blush; the bird songs were so haunting, and far thunder boomed, taunting; oh, such a serenity . . . as I caught the rain in my palm, and felt nature's unity; in the hush of rain calm. ________________________________ May 26, 2018 (Edited August 11, 2018) Poetry/Rhyme/a calm serenity Copyright Protected, ID 18-1026-138-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Mid August Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place _____________________________________ Written for the contest, Eight Lines sponsor, Joseph May, Fourth Place

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Date: 8/17/2018 6:30:00 AM
As always the grace and flow is wonderful. Congrats on your win. Faux
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:55:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/15/2018 4:02:00 PM
Lovely, Dear Heart. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 8/13/2018 3:46:00 PM
Beautifully written, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/5/2018 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance. The nature at its best.
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Date: 6/4/2018 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem about nature. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/3/2018 9:37:00 PM
Lovely, BW. A haunting, melodic write. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:25:00 PM
Haunting bird songs in the rain....Congrats on your win Broken Wings
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Date: 5/28/2018 7:28:00 AM
I always find the rain and distant thunder to be very calming; this poem took me there, Constance, I enjoyed it. John
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Date: 5/28/2018 4:44:00 AM
So gracious and wonderful...wow... Mindblowing beauty here. -JWE
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Date: 5/26/2018 6:43:00 PM
A very pleasant response to Nature's call, BW. MY COMPLIMENTS!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2018 5:42:00 AM
Ralph, thank you so much for visiting, and for the compliment, appreciate a lot ~

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