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excerpt from I WANT TO LEAVE THIS WORLD A BETTER PLACE

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I want to leave this world a better place At least my ripple into this sea of life To have touched several hearts Connected with some souls Sparked a few children’s aspirations I want to leave at least My ripple into this sea that is life AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on June 2, 2020

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Date: 6/2/2020 8:08:00 PM
I'm sure that you have already made quite an impact, and you still have miles and miles to go before you sleep. ~ Robert Frosty
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Date: 6/2/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Frosty. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/2/2020 7:50:00 PM
a beautiful aspiration, line - beautifully described...
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Date: 6/2/2020 11:50:00 PM
thanks, Ilene.

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