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A Broken Soul

Oh, my little angel, looking into your eyes wasn’t easy as you always had them closed, Happy and peaceful as you enjoyed your afternoon doze, I wonder as I wander through this busy world, Why do my arms yearn to spin you around in a dancing twirl? As I recall the voices of you and your friends from the birthday crowd, All I could hear was your voice singing joyfully, making me so proud, Then, on that beautiful summer’s day, The grass in the pastures was lusciously green, A few wild horses were grazing, your rabbits were nibbling away, but our Guinea fowls were nowhere to be seen. Oh, why, why did you not sleep in late like you always did? Why did you sneak into the woods so far and deep that no one could have heard your shouts or your screams? Silent tears stream each day, and so I willed the hour of darkness to come, In the darkness, no one could see the sadness or the shell of a person I had become. Your presence kept me sane and focused, Beneath dim skies, with a heavy heart, I watched as they laid you down to rest, By your favourite spot near the pond of white lilies and pink lotus, In this broken soul, the echoes of your infectious laughter will always remind me that I was Blessed. by Zyrool

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Date: 7/6/2025 7:38:00 PM
I can imagine the heartache you have. May you find peace.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/7/2025 11:06:00 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you so much, means a lot to. I take comfort that time heals. Have a wonderful new week ahead my dear friend.
Date: 7/3/2025 10:44:00 AM
A lovely poem, Zyrool. It's a tragedy anytime we lose one we love, but especially sad when it is a child. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings through your poetry. I hope we can become friend here at Poetry Soup. I'm adding you to the list of poets I follow and hope you will follow mine also so we can get to know each other better. A poet friend to be, Bill
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/4/2025 8:23:00 AM
Hello Bill, thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot. Friends are great to have. I shall be adding you to my list too. Wishing you a fabulous weekend, my poet friend.
Date: 6/21/2025 9:59:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, It is a sad poem. Tears in my eyes as i read this poem. As i read this poem i wondered why she went into the woods. That is a mystery to me. No one knows why she went into the woods. I feel the grieve you feel because it is hard to lose a child. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2025 12:29:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, You are very welcome. I will. I hope you have one to/. I sent you a soup mail. Hugs. my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 6/19/2025 7:47:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, a truly moving and sad piece. I wish it was fiction :( Hugs
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/19/2025 7:56:00 AM
Hello Anne, thank you for the read, greatly appreciated. Life’s full of unexpected events, my friend. Have a great day.
Date: 6/17/2025 7:49:00 PM
How beautifully sad Zyrool….so moving! I do hope it is fiction…..Debx
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/18/2025 12:43:00 AM
Thank you for the read, Deb.Means a lot.Sadly it’s non fiction. Have a great rest of the week , my poet friend.
Date: 6/17/2025 6:23:00 AM
Wow. So tragic and yet the memories provide a measure of comfort. One can't help but wonder what occurred in those sinister woods
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/17/2025 6:31:00 AM
Hello Tom, thank you for the read. I guess childish curiosity then fallen into a watering hole. Stay Blessed my friend.

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