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A Broken Picture

Some say “broken picture” instead of “broken record” Let's get our idioms straight to avoid the literary hoards Kinda humorous though Turned my crank, don't ya know Holy doo doo, this old duffer is really bored!

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/7/2017 8:45:00 AM

I don't imagine you remain bored for very long. Having a poetic mind can turn most anything banal into a poetry adventure. As you did in this piece.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 9:38:00 AM

NOPE! Never bored... you got it! If I was to tell you how many things I got into in my life! Now now, let's keep it clean and sophisticated! LOL Love, Jack!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/7/2017 8:18:00 AM

A broken picture is worth a bottle of glue//If Jack is bored, then I am too//Let's raise the bar//for har-de-har//Then the readers say, "What else is new?" GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 9:35:00 AM

GOOD GOOD MORNING SIR JOHN JOHN!!! Sounds like a broken picture to me!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/7/2017 7:20:00 AM

"Holy doo doo," Ha Ha! I know what you were really thinking of there my friend! I thought this limerick to be a lot of fun, what an exemplary piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 7:26:00 AM

Guess I need a hobby... wait a minute, isn't poetry a sort of hobby! I'm soooooo confused! GOOD MORNING RUSSELL!!!