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Verse A: Oh how you've honed rebellion, made an art of breaking rules Just to garner my affection, but I didn't have the tools (And I never suffered fools - no I never suffered fools) I loved you with my diligence and bent my back to make A bridge of opportunities and a path for you to take (Cleared a passage for your sake - yes a passage for your sake) Chorus A: Can you see it, in the mist There on high - there on high? There's an arch, heaven-kissed In the sky, the hazy sky You may not see it now But I built it strong with love And one day it will hold you Bye-and-bye, bye-and-bye Yes, one day it will hold you Bye-and-bye. Verse B: Oh I know how I've failed you in many ways I can't explain We'll never have a friendship - I've caused you so much pain (So many wounds remain - yes so many wounds remain) Still I love you to my marrow, with a magnitude, profound And I built a span, enduring, so you'd walk on solid ground (So you'd be safe-and-sound - yes so you'd be safe-and-sound) Chorus B: Can you see it, in the night There on high - there on high? There's an arch, burning bright In the sky, the somber sky Perhaps you can not see it But with love, it long endures And one day it may save you Bye-and-bye, bye-and-bye Yes, one day it may save you Bye-and-bye. Verse C: Oh I know my life is waning, and my faculties are weak My strength is failing daily, and I've lost my grand physique (Now my prognosis is bleak - yes my prognosis is bleak) And though I can not tell you how I feel before I go I know someday you'll cross that bridge, and then, my son, you'll know (Just how much I love you so - yes how much I love you so) Chorus C: Can you see it, through the storm There on high - there on high? There's a refuge, safe and warm In the sky, the windy sky I know that you can't see it, but have faith that it is there I molded it with these two hands, with kindness, love and care So every time you need a bridge you'll know that I am there To carry you to safety Bye-and-bye, bye-and-bye Yes, to carry you to safety ... Bye-and-bye. (Repeat Out) ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Bridge Over Troubled Waters" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 10/17/2017 3:14:00 AM
Gregory, you are setting the bar with this fantastic piece of work.. congratulations...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/17/2017 9:11:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Craig, and I thank you so very kindly, my friend! :-)
Date: 10/13/2017 7:57:00 AM
No wonder number one! Well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/13/2017 8:06:00 PM
You're very sweet, Jean - thank you so much! :-)
Date: 10/13/2017 5:54:00 AM
You always write such passionate poetry--well deserved top win for this masterpiece, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/13/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Vijay, I greatly appreciate the wonderful comment, my friend, and so pleased you enjoyed this one! :-)
Date: 10/12/2017 8:35:00 AM
Such a beautiful, heartfelt Lyric, Gregory. So deserving of the top of the podium win! Congratulations. Sandra
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you muchly, Sandra, I so appreciate that, and I'm glad you liked my poem - I shed some tears writing this one, as my dad is failing quickly. Blessings, friend! <3
Date: 10/11/2017 7:44:00 PM
Greg, brilliant and beautiful, congratulations on your top win !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:42:00 PM
Blessings and thanks to you for the kind words, Constance - thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 10/11/2017 5:43:00 PM
Wow! Greg, These are some heartfelt lyrics that just tugg at the heart. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:41:00 PM
Very sweet of you to say so, Alexis, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! Blessings to you, friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/11/2017 4:28:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win with this moving piece! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:39:00 PM
Very kind comments, Janice - thank you so much!
Date: 10/11/2017 3:33:00 PM
Well done Gregory, congratulations on your win...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie - much appreciated!
Date: 10/11/2017 3:26:00 PM
Beautiful write Gregory..Congrats on your top win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph - very kind of you, my friend!
Date: 10/11/2017 1:37:00 PM
Loved, loved, LOVED reading your beautiful lyrics!!! You are so very gifted. I, too, can't wait to hear this put to music. Congrats on #1 !!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Judith - I'm glad you liked it - it's very dear to my heart! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 10/11/2017 12:28:00 PM
What can I say Greg, this is brilliant, exactly what I was hoping for, now you just need music and you've got a hit! Congrats on a solo number 1!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/12/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, I am so honored that you liked this and felt it worthy of a top place, as it is very special to me, and I shed a few tears writing it, (for real) ... humbled and appreciative, and it made my day. Blessings, friend! :-)
Date: 10/10/2017 10:56:00 AM
Wow, Greg, this is breathtaking and a brilliant lyric, John is gonna love this, just like I do:) I am so sad that I couldn't write one for this...but then, I couldn't have bettered this beauty, no one can:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/10/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jo, that's very kind of you ... hoping John likes it as much as you do! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 10/8/2017 9:19:00 AM
WONDERFUL. I wish to listen in music. So nicely penned. Wish you best for contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/8/2017 3:47:00 PM
Very kind of you to say so, Anisha - thank you so very much, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Date: 10/6/2017 8:28:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Gregory. If this does not garner a top spot, I don't know what COULD. You did just what he said, even making it a song. We may be like a brother and sister in how we think, but I don't think I can equal you with this topic!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 10:41:00 PM
(And you can still call me "Greg" - all my good friends do!) ;-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 10:39:00 PM
You also give schmucks like me a high mark to aspire to, and do so with grace and kindness, and I love, love, love that you enjoy my scratchings! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 10:38:00 PM
You are so sweet, Andrea, and I can't tell you how much I value your opinion and comments, as you are such an amazing writer, but you can compete with ANY poet on this planet, (and probably elsewhere!), and do so with work of the highest caliber.
Date: 10/6/2017 2:02:00 PM
Excellent lament , Gregory: Beautiful chorus of sadness and optimism!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 6:03:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Ralph - so pleased you liked this one - thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 10/6/2017 6:32:00 AM
"love you to my marrow" excellent pen my friend. Good luck for the contest, I'd like to hear this whence set to music :) xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen - that's so sweet of you! I shall let you know when it's recorded, though it probably won't be until next year, as I have to finish my current album first. I have most of the music written, however. Blessings! <3
Date: 10/6/2017 6:14:00 AM
Loved reading this poem--a lovely song--best for a win, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 5:57:00 PM
Very kind of you, Vijay - thank you so much! :-)
Date: 10/6/2017 4:08:00 AM
Ohh, this is SO cool my friend!! This is the musician in you, it's a STRONG lyric, good luck Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/6/2017 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darren, I'm really pleased you liked this one, Dear Friend - put a smile on my face! Blessings and hugs! <3 :-)

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