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A Bridge Across the Raging Sea

There was a time in life so long ago when all my visions suddenly seemed dark; the nighttime sky was void of moonlight’s glow, and sunless winter days were grey and stark. I felt as though the walls were closing in, and squeezing from my soul my very life as I was drowning in my sea of sin surrounded by the darkness and the strife. As I lay in the gutters of my dreams, a hand so tenderly reached out to me; a stranger lifting spirits from extremes then bridged the raging waters of my sea. His soft grey eyes so gently gave a nod, and suddenly I saw the face of God. May 17, 2020 Poem of the Day - May 19, 2020

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Date: 1/26/2022 1:31:00 PM
"As I lay in the gutters of my dreams," --what a great line! Many congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/27/2022 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, PS, I appreciate it. John
Date: 1/25/2022 8:11:00 AM
That's so beautiful, John, and so nice to read your lovrly poetry. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/25/2022 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 1/25/2022 12:52:00 AM
Breathtakingly spiritual! Thanks for sharing this with us all, John! Congrats on your win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/25/2022 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, US, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 8/24/2020 7:04:00 PM
I adore this poem. Breathtakingly beautiful words. Thank you JG:)kelli
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/24/2020 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Kelli, I appreciate it. John
Date: 6/10/2020 8:01:00 PM
Lovely poem, needed now more than ever. Really well written.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/10/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, l’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 5/24/2020 11:11:00 AM
Back with belated congrats on POTD, John. This is so deserving of the honor --as are many of your writes, truth be told. Best wishes, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/24/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, I always appreciate your wonderful comments. Cheers. John
Date: 5/23/2020 1:47:00 PM
Oh wow John what a wonderful poem - imagine seeing the face of God - I have heard His voice once but that is a poem I have to think of very carefully on how I will write it. Congratulations on your awesome win. Blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/24/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenn, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Many blessings to you. Hugs, John
Date: 5/21/2020 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win John! This contest closed before I had time to write a poem for it. xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/21/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 5/21/2020 12:35:00 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you again on your win John :) This is a beautiful sonnet indeed.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/21/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 5/20/2020 4:06:00 PM
An amazing write John, I see it won Potd as well, congrats on your 3rd place win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/20/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting a sonnet contest. I enjoy writing this form. John
Date: 5/20/2020 8:52:00 AM
Excellent write, John! Surely God is our salvation from troubled waters! Congratulations on POTD!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 5/20/2020 4:24:00 AM
a souper sonnet John! Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/20/2020 5:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan, I appreciate your kind comments. Hugs, John
Date: 5/19/2020 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful penning John, congratulations on POTD. ~mo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Mo (aka PT), I appreciate your kind comments. John
Date: 5/19/2020 4:34:00 PM
Congrats John on poem of the day--very apt write for the contest theme.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/19/2020 4:32:00 PM
Bridge am engaging Across sea which is raging while distance gauging My Horn Haiku
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, James. Enjoyed the Horn haiku.
Date: 5/19/2020 1:40:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 5/19/2020 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. Your words Shine. : ) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy!
Date: 5/19/2020 1:16:00 PM
This is outstanding John! It is very deserving of the honor of POTD! Congratulations my friend. xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Connie. Hugs, John
Date: 5/19/2020 11:11:00 AM
Hi John, back to say congratulations on your POTD. I so enjoyed this poem the first time I read it and it is a treat to see it as POTD.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Sam.
Date: 5/19/2020 11:10:00 AM
Very true...believe it or not...it's the face of GOD...Congratulations John on POTD
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 11:48:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/19/2020 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I love your line, "and suddenly I saw the face of God." A great way to end. Enjoy your win and day............
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 5/19/2020 10:33:00 AM
Stunning write, John, well deserved POTD.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/19/2020 9:14:00 AM
This is a beautiful divine sonnet filled with the light of lives. Congratulations on POTD John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/19/2020 9:08:00 AM
Wow...a lovely spiritual sonnet about finding your lifeline. Congrats on your POtD.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeanne, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/19/2020 7:46:00 AM
Loved reading this again....congrats! xx Rhonda
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thanks again, Rhonda, I'm glad you are able to gain inspiration from this piece. Hugs, John
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