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A Boys Dream

. Yes I lifeless all of me limp my physical my emotional all of me lifeless because she touched me she spoke my name she smiled she laughed she shared with me what every boy dreams of She dined with me walked with me No longer was I dreaming or alone each night she slept with me she shared with me her dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/17/2009 4:46:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE FOR THE WOMAN OF YOUR LIFE,I MISSED THIS James-thought i ve hit all of yours-charma
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Date: 5/25/2009 4:07:00 PM
Heart warming. -Alley
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:09:00 AM
This is sweet, and filled with romance, James!! Great work!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:58:00 AM
Sounds like true love, James! You certainly know how to make us feel the romance in your poems. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:33:00 AM
Dear James, YOU Romantic YOU a Beautiful verse of LOVE Superbly done ALWAYS...HG If YOU want to write a sad POEM YOU will have to Live the moment over again After reading YOU it would be very interesting to read the sad side of YOUR HEART ALWAYS...HG
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