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A Bliss Eternal An Ode To Tennyson

Dare I shed this skin, and heart and bone neath this hollow shell, where the ecstasy of life though death dwells, a season for all time; they pass as sand through the hourglass, dripping down to melted months, I feel as the slitted urn, eased to deathly mirth Be I that fain patron of death --- that austere table set for my invincible demise, I cry as a desert blaze; a lament disguised in the throes of eve, in the time of nightingales I do sing; and whipporwills rejoice (in lofty perches so devine) a final tear of my leaving Our graves have been well prepared, and we all know this well --- those old days shall not return, with it those pink morns of youth, and the bitter-sweet of graying midlife --- the eases of eve await ever still; we move towards night.... to the bitter pill of midnite --- 'O midnite! you chime in my soul with the rooster's call! Prepare the hearse of life, and roll it to the mountainside; in the foothills I do sleep..... and upon the mounts where the eagles scream, where the vales awake, and the Lillie's surmise a harvest of their age; arise with me 'O Peace, for it is to the heavens I do ride, should I have wings as eagles --- gliding swiftly do I fly; yet my feathers shall be plucked, and flight jostled --- til, leaving no regrets, no evil, fretting what I left behind, a bliss eternal

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Date: 3/28/2017 5:42:00 PM
Wow, I take a bow to such finely written poetry, I was enthralled from start to finish!
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:10:00 PM
A masterful and deeply written piece my good friend. I've seen none write better in this form.. A7 and a fav...
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/20/2017 10:32:00 AM
It's an honor Robert, I thought you might appreciate this goth-like poem, which was as much a journey than a deep write; death's cold hands actually felt further away while penning it...God bless:-)
Date: 3/11/2017 9:53:00 AM
This was very deeply written and I enjoyed it greatly :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/19/2017 12:40:00 PM
Many thanks Tatianna; death is something we all must deal with, unfortunately, this poem was just my way of accepting it and overcoming; unfortunately due to the lack of comments people perhaps thought differently...
Date: 3/10/2017 3:02:00 PM
"The moving finger writes - and having writ moves on" - Omar Khayam. I enjoyed this meditation on mortality. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/19/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Matt, your comments are always most kind and your appreciation of my works are always welcomed. Hope you enjoy your weekend!

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