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A Bleeding Heart

Have you ever seen a bleeding heart? Blood gushing out from its arteries and veins? Red splattered all around? A compassionate man would rush in, with cotton and bandages, to try and stop the heart from losing more blood. Have you ever seen a heart bleeding from inside? Can you imagine how one feels his heart bleeding from inside, drowning in his own blood? We are all emergency paramedics, nursing our own hearts' wounds, as we try to heal others with a dose of love....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/21/2016 3:18:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful write my friend....Vlad.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Vlad! *^_^*
Date: 3/20/2016 9:57:00 AM
Teddy, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Laura! *^_^*
Date: 2/24/2016 4:59:00 PM
I have never seen any bleeding heart... but your last line kept alive. .. Nice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2016 6:26:00 PM
Hahaha. I have never a bleeding heart too....thanks Pashang, for enjoying my work and applauding me!! :-)
Date: 2/21/2016 4:55:00 PM
Very poignant and beautiful write. I love the last stanza. A 7++
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/22/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Njeri. Asante sana.

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