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A Blanket of White

A blanket of white stretches the horizon leaving a brightness I never knew sparkles, nearly blinding, hold my attention I am a hostage to the view Tiny specks, which to some, might look like footprints zig~zag amongst the crystal pure lines divided, near oblivion fused and humps that rise and fall, obscure I imagine where the winds blew in her own auspicious mind swirling through the barren and slashing through the pines Ancient settlers englighten my perception as a hint of chestnut fills the air when sunlight wakes the morning I wonder, will it all just disappear

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Date: 12/13/2017 12:52:00 AM
Beautiful, Tim. I love the ethereal feeling new fallen snow gives. I remember looking out the window as a child and having the same feelings you have described in this lovely poem. Blessings...
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Date: 12/12/2017 10:55:00 PM
You've describe something very beautiful, but yes, it could disappear in a day. That's what makes it so special.
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Date: 12/12/2017 3:54:00 PM
An enticing write Tim with enchanting imagery. Beautiful.
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Date: 12/12/2017 2:16:00 PM
Oh so beautiful Tim! Love it :)
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Date: 12/12/2017 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful imagery...potent thoughts--well done, Tim!
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