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Since early childhood he had been wandering the world vast treks completed mainly on foot, some like in days of old walking in the footsteps of Stanley and listening to tales told of safari's into the depths of the dark continent there finding gold crossing over the towering escarpment lighting fires against the cold huddling together sharing a self caught meal, settling down in the fold then onwards deeper finding an elephants grave yard, tusks already sold their bones litter the valley, stark white bleached by the sun, some have mould picked over by jackals and hyenas, who now the lions have departed grow bold finding diamonds lying sparkling on the ground. Then onward to travel the world footnote: elephants grave yard. This has not been proved although many tales give the idea some credence. People who have followed dying elephants always seem to lose them around the escarpment where they just seem to vanish. I doubt that such a thing exists with all the scientific-al advances now available. Written 04/28/2014 Contest Any poem 30

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Date: 5/18/2014 9:22:00 AM
Well crafted, caught in the story, I didn't notice the rhyme. Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:06:00 PM
This poem was a very intriguing and interesting read.... You did a great job with the rhyming. Well done, Shadow! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/16/2014 9:48:00 AM
This a a truly fine write, worthy of the win. Congratulations. I learnt about the nature, something I never knew. Thanks for sharing Keep in touch SAM :-)
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win Shadow
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:04:00 AM
your poem's breathtaking. Shadow, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, Shadow ! - Well deserved! - (I have not participated in the contest for a while - like writing whatever comes to my mind.) - Have a nice day. - Be proud of your write :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:16:00 AM
Wonderful altogether unique thoughts Shadow n a beautiful piece ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/15/2014 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Shadow
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Date: 5/15/2014 12:46:00 AM
Hello Shadow,. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:00:00 AM
Very interesting tale, sounds plausible to me.
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:30:00 PM
I love the adventure of this monorhyme...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/28/2014 5:08:00 AM
Interesting safari shared through stories ..It would be interesting to see some of these places but by someone else filming them and me viewing them on TV. I enjoyed reading your creative work this morning. I wonder how elephants know where to go when they die and if the herd of elephants consider that place sacred? Sara
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:46:00 PM
this is so interesting, Shadow. It's like the introduction to something really big. Just a taste of a huge adventure encompassing all the world. What made you think of this?? Is it for a contest? Or do you have more adventures in store for us?
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