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A Bit of Fun

A bit of fun There is a man crying In a AA van on the edge of town I think he is heading for a Breakdown >

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2015 2:13:00 PM

A top 7 rating for this write, Michael! Love your wit! // paul

Gry Christensen

Date: 7/24/2014 1:03:00 AM

Needed this laugh! Short and funny = great!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 5/13/2014 10:11:00 PM

May be he needs to turn around. He hears noise. He asks, What is that sound? LOL... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2014 1:10:00 PM

LOL Michael. Hugs Jan x

Michael Ward

Date: 5/8/2014 8:15:00 AM

Hi dr,I have just read your poem TWILIGHT and I Think you have a touch of the classic poets I would like to hear what you think of nonsense Poetry. Regards. MIKE. WARD

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2014 2:13:00 AM

Very funny and humorous write, Michael

Michael Ward
Date: 5/8/2014 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Dr Ram Your opinion is highly respected, thank you again. Regards MIKE. WARD