A Bit of Fun

A bit of fun

There is a man crying
In a AA van on the edge of town  
I think he is heading for a
Breakdown >
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 2:13 PM
A top 7 rating for this write, Michael! Love your wit! // paul
Christensen Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Needed this laugh! Short and funny = great!
Walker  Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 10:11 PM
May be he needs to turn around. He hears noise. He asks, What is that sound? LOL... Verlena
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:10 PM
LOL Michael. Hugs Jan x
Ward Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Hi dr,I have just read your poem TWILIGHT and I Think you have a touch of the classic poets I would like to hear what you think of nonsense Poetry. Regards. MIKE. WARD
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:13 AM
Very funny and humorous write, Michael
Ward Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Thank you Dr Ram Your opinion is highly respected, thank you again. Regards MIKE. WARD
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