A Big Frog and a Little Frog Seek a Lily Pad

(a rhyming fable in haiku syllable count) In a little pond a big frog and a small frog both sit on a log. That log is then seen by a little boy at play who takes it away. Left without their log, both frogs spy a lily pad; the big frog is bad. . . Though the pad is small - onto it the big frog hops. The small pad drops! Into the small pond disappears the little pad. The big frog gets sad. He just swims away. Now the small frog seeks a pad. He is hopping mad! From one lily pad to another goes that frog who has lost his log. Never giving up, the little frog starts to think. . . Which pad will not sink? Small ones are no good. They sink like the Titanic. I need gigantic! Having found one large, now the frog itty bitty is sitting pretty! And the moral is “Better to be a small frog rather than a big frog in a little pond” Or “Don’t get sad, get hopping mad!” For the children's Fable Contest of Carol Eastman
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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Oh my gosh what would the workshop committee think about when reading these haiku. lol
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:00 PM
Choosy little frogs. congratulations, Andrea. Love, Joyce
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:19 AM
So much fun! Congrats Andrea.
Jerden Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Interesting use of the haiku format and a great little tale! Congratulations!
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Lovely froggy write, Andrea! Most enjoyable...so is the moral:) Congrats on another fine win. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:23 AM
or big things come in small packages... how interesting, andie.. sweet congrats and huggs!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:20 AM
This is such a lovely write Andrea ,, more so wonderful in haiku form,, u really hv a great pen dear! Congrats on top win!
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 7:35 PM
glad it had a hoppy ending Andrea. a worthy winner. Hugs Jan xx
Rivenbark Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 6:27 PM
I love this, would have never thought to use that format. Its fantastic! Congrats on your win!
Lawless Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 12:25 PM
This could put the tortoise and the hare in second place. Thanks for the chuckle and congrats.
Eastman Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Way to go! Spot on fable. Loved it. Congrats on the win and I'm glad you entered it.
Mannan Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:52 AM
I absolutely loved it. Many congrats for this win.
Harrington Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Ha! I like it. Congrats. TLH
Gorelick Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:23 AM
HEHEHEHEH....good one..congrats. BG
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 12:07 AM
Andrea,,, congrats with your wonderful froggy win.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight~xox~PD
Salama  Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Great story Andrea. Great combination of Haikus! :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! I love the rhyming haiku...an adorable story with a lesson. Blessings and love, Rhonda
May Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 10:04 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
Eastman Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:51 AM
I enjoyed this greatly. A chain of haiku's was inspired... I did it once on a poem about words... It always adds more to the imagination. And it's so unique. Congratulations on the win.
Horsman Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 8:45 AM
congrats on this win, wonderful all of them. harry
Williams Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 3:48 AM
Andrea congrats on a teriffic win, ..david
A  Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:42 AM
ANDREA, Congratulations;-) & Thanks for supporting my contest~ :-)
Breidenthal Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Awesome! Sounds like a cute children story! :) Actually my avatars are not kangaroos, and you are not the first to mistaken it. Hehehe! They are actually Sphinxes - hairless cats! :D Always, Laura
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