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A Better Me

It's now October, the time of year between heat and cold when clocks fall back in Autumn. I am happiest with me if by 6 AM, I am able to greet the dawn. I am an achiever of the highest kind when I say, "Good morning sunrise"!. I tell you, there is a mental, emotional, physical, and spiritual therapy. It's so divine; the likes of which I have not found anywhere else on planet earth. How awesome this rising sun who dares to bother, and to better the life of me. If I can thank God and be seated at my favorite spot before the rising sun; if a cup of coffee fills one hand and my Bible fills the other; If I am fortunate enough to capture the power of 'the quiet' before I make a single utter; If blessed to achieve such a feat; better prepared to advance and not retreat; Then, I am a candidate for victory and not defeat. I think that is when I have shaken hands with 'the stillness', and embraced a better me. 12162017 Poetry Soup, Third Contest, Morning Ritual, Line Gauthier, HM; Second Contest 11/27/17, Couplet Oct-Nov '17, Laura Loo; First Posted 10112017, First Contest, October Standard, Strand

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Date: 1/5/2018 5:53:00 AM
Congrats, on HM, I got one too, didn't know it till Gregory R Barden congrats. me .Hope you are thrilled as I am, first contest entered. Let's keep up with each other.
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Date: 1/4/2018 10:27:00 PM
Very well done, Curtis - congratulations on your Honorable Mention, and Happy New Year, my friend - this is gorgeous, and a sublime way to begin the day! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:53:00 AM
Lovely introspection as the sun rises. Well done, Curtis.
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Date: 10/11/2017 12:30:00 PM
Lovely thoughts for the day--well expressed!
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