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A Bench In the Shade

You’ve got it made With a bench in the shade When the sun is boiling hot But you’ve been played For this charade Is part of Nature’s plot. See, I’m afraid You’ve been betrayed For thinking that this spot Will masquerade The heat that’s weighed You down – but it will not. It’s just delayed The rays displayed From letting you know what You might have prayed To barricade Has added up to squat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/15/2016 2:39:00 PM
Original form Ilene. Well written and good consistent rhyme and rhythm. Trevor
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Date: 8/30/2016 2:51:00 PM
Very good Ilene. From trying a monorhyme recently, I appreciate they are not as easy as they first appear.
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Date: 8/30/2016 5:48:00 AM
Like the humour, Ilene. I could picture you trying to find a cool bench in the shade. Barry
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