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His mismatched clothes hung upon his gaunt frame, resembling a scarecrow, lean and haggard. He begged from the shadows to hide his shame, undernourished, he stumbled and staggered. With a toothless grin contorting his face, he'd sit with his skeletal hand outstretched. He appeared repulsive and out of place; his claim to be a father seemed far-fetched. His misery drew not a single tear, only your scorn, mockery, and laughter. You took the time to make it crystal clear; that the homeless aren't worth looking after. What will be your excuse come judgment day when Jesus asks; what made you act that way?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/1/2019 2:36:00 PM
Totally inspirational, Emile. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/1/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, your opinion is one I value my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2018 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile! This is a moving and beautiful piece. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2018 5:03:00 AM
CONGRATS to win. Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/30/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/29/2018 8:37:00 AM
A great one! Congrats!
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Date: 12/29/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/29/2018 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win dear friend Emile. I wrote to poem for your contest "A Short Story of Winter Wonders" in Sonnet form but perhaps I forgot that currently I am not a premium member and can not enter any contest. Anyhow, my good wishes for your contest. With best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/29/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Ravindra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/29/2018 2:08:00 AM
Your deeply felt poem earned it a high place in my contest, Emile. Congratulations! Julia, :)
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Julia Ward
Date: 12/29/2018 11:01:00 AM
You're very welcome. A Happy New Year!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/29/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Julia, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/28/2018 3:51:00 PM
- A deeply touching writing, Emile ... gives me many thoughts - A difficult and hard life ... no one can judge by appearance - Best wishes for a great new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/29/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/27/2018 3:10:00 PM
that reminds me of kafka's shorty story about the door to the law...a man waits all his life to enter finds it's closed to him when he dies....it was meant to ridicule beuracracy but has many othe interpretations : )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/27/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Sand, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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