A Bee - a Gift

A Bee - A gift

One early morn
I let my eyes roamed the verdure
throughout the small garden 
in front of the yard
and
wondering whether
I could find a little refreshment
during my hectic hours
then
i was elated
with the generous nature
that sent me its special taste

a bee - a gift

its lightly buzz
intoned its music eloquently 
into my ears

a bee – a gift

from out of the window
I could see
its lightly dances to and from 
the edges of flowers and leaves
over of itself 
it was more than its marvelous charms

very amazing
Implied with its secret silence
which was really magnificent

Its promises that it never denied
Its heart that it never betray
to visit the flowers that love it so much
Its heart that always giving
Honey and its sweetest fragrance

Even when he fled away
He left me one eternal sting
In the palm of my heart
a beautiful poem

A bee - A gift


~ ( c ) Sukmawati Komala ~
Dec 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/23/2013 12:43:00 AM
how sweet this is and that sweet sting to the heart at the end. A great final touch to this gem!!
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Date: 1/26/2014 11:15:00 PM
hi sweet Andrea... thank you for visit.. hope today sings you a tuneable music :) much love <3
Date: 12/22/2013 12:53:00 AM
Nice....the beauty of Nature.
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