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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required. 

The pale moon emerged from dark clouds with a ghostly glow, like a spirit light. Casting its image onto the darkness it ascends high into an ebony sky, where juxtaposed by night it's a beckon of light. (Yalto) 07/16/2022 One In Five 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May \ # 4. "The pale moon emerged from dark clouds"

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Date: 8/31/2022 11:27:00 AM
Beautifully done Yalto, Emile:-) Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2022 1:26:00 PM
Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, and I do like using your form, Emile.
Date: 7/30/2022 6:35:00 PM
AAAAAWWWEEESSSUUUMMM! And that's just the display! :) ~Anaya
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/30/2022 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Anaya, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2022 3:35:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2022 1:12:00 AM
This Yalto form is exemplified with this magical enchanted poem Emile. I really love his form, and you do it so well! Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/20/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate it, I hope you are feeling better my friend, Emile.

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