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A Beautiful World

hello everyone after reading SENORITA SEXY SENRYUS by Panagiota Romios I was inspired to write the entry below I was reminded of a late poetess Pam who wrote under the name of gungalo always did gungalo push me to write of love and to push the envelope I am thankful for that and I am thankful to Pangie today blessings to all thank you "a beautiful world" because of you and you alone I see through a magical window a beautiful world I call my own with wide island eyes that glow at times I look to see what you see hoping you discover all this is real and accept your love is right for me gazes and whispers I'll forever steal because of you I feel as never before with every beat every pulse every touch we dress to undress leading us to more love we express that is never to much only the outside light peering in sees such beauty of love silhouettes at hand watching desires move like a sea breeze for there is no other who holds command SkyWatcher 03-01-23

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/5/2023 11:09:00 AM

Your poem was full of beautiful imagery, Lisa. You learned well. Bless those that have been an inspiration to your lovely poetry, my friend. You're on a roll, in March! We want more. :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/7/2023 7:42:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Can I wrap this message and review up to keep. I am beyond honored. Truly. Please excuse this short and pale response to your most generous and wonderful review. Blessings always. I will turn to your page and work soon. May today be a good day.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/3/2023 6:33:00 AM

'A Beautiful world' indeed, Lisa, leads to a beautiful poem...Harry

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/4/2023 1:48:00 AM

Good Morning hh. Hi. I am so honored that you took the time to visit and to leave such a lovely comment. Truly. I know life has been full and beyond busy for you so thank you. May today be a good day. May there for love for all. Blessings always. (smile and peace)

Anil Deo

Date: 3/3/2023 1:29:00 AM

Wow, rhyming stanzas and sensual messages impeccably presented. Should be POTD. Shalom shalom, keep on keeping on great Lady Poet

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/3/2023 4:10:00 AM

Reply Two. I have to continue. My point in all this to you is Gungalo was the master of love entries with the emotive factor being off the charts that I can't explain. Never stopping or pushing me. I still have much to learn but I am forever grateful to her. I am also grateful to Pangie for the inspiration. Without saying for you as well. I hope this entry made the grade and mark. Shalom Shalom Remain safe always Love and Blessings always (smile)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/3/2023 4:02:00 AM

Oh Anil saying thank you is inadequate however thank you thank you. Years back when I had the courage to join a poetry membership with no training or experience an extraordinary poetess who wrote under the name of gungalo turned to my page and for nine years from 2005 to 2014 not one day went by that we didn't see or comment on each other's work. Always did we find each other from site to site. I need to continue this message Anil.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/1/2023 12:23:00 PM

A pleasure to read this confession of love, Lisa. It is beautifully written. I hope Pangie reads it. I know she'll be flattered. I would be:)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/1/2023 1:25:00 PM

Hello Daniel. I am ever so grateful for such a wonderful and generous review and commentary. Truly. And yes, never do I take such generosity for granted. I hope that pangie does see this, yes, I hope you are right. Thank you again. Have a wonderful night and I will return to your page very soon. Blessings (smile)