Lisa Ricci Poet Quatrain

A Beautiful World

hello everyone
after reading SENORITA SEXY SENRYUS by Panagiota Romios
I was inspired to write the entry below
I was reminded of a late poetess Pam who wrote under the name of gungalo
always did gungalo push me to write of love and to push the envelope
I am thankful for that and I am thankful to Pangie today
blessings to all
thank you


"a beautiful world"

because of you and you alone
I see through a magical window
a beautiful world I call my own
with wide island eyes that glow

at times I look to see what you see
hoping you discover all this is real
and accept your love is right for me
gazes and whispers I'll forever steal

because of you I feel as never before
with every beat every pulse every touch
we dress to undress leading us to more
love we express that is never to much

only the outside light peering in sees
such beauty of love silhouettes at hand
watching desires move like a sea breeze
for there is no other who holds command

SkyWatcher
03-01-23

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Bill Baker March 5, 2023 at 11:09 AM Your poem was full of beautiful imagery, Lisa. You learned well. Bless those that have been an inspiration to your lovely poetry, my friend. You're on a roll, in March! We want more. :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill Lisa Ricci March 7, 2023 at 7:42 AM Good Morning Bill. Can I wrap this message and review up to keep. I am beyond honored. Truly. Please excuse this short and pale response to your most generous and wonderful review. Blessings always. I will turn to your page and work soon. May today be a good day.

Harry Horsman March 3, 2023 at 6:33 AM 'A Beautiful world' indeed, Lisa, leads to a beautiful poem...Harry Lisa Ricci March 4, 2023 at 1:48 AM Good Morning hh. Hi. I am so honored that you took the time to visit and to leave such a lovely comment. Truly. I know life has been full and beyond busy for you so thank you. May today be a good day. May there for love for all. Blessings always. (smile and peace)

Anil Deo March 3, 2023 at 1:29 AM Wow, rhyming stanzas and sensual messages impeccably presented. Should be POTD. Shalom shalom, keep on keeping on great Lady Poet Lisa Ricci March 3, 2023 at 4:10 AM Reply Two. I have to continue. My point in all this to you is Gungalo was the master of love entries with the emotive factor being off the charts that I can't explain. Never stopping or pushing me. I still have much to learn but I am forever grateful to her. I am also grateful to Pangie for the inspiration. Without saying for you as well. I hope this entry made the grade and mark. Shalom Shalom Remain safe always Love and Blessings always (smile) Lisa Ricci March 3, 2023 at 4:02 AM Oh Anil saying thank you is inadequate however thank you thank you. Years back when I had the courage to join a poetry membership with no training or experience an extraordinary poetess who wrote under the name of gungalo turned to my page and for nine years from 2005 to 2014 not one day went by that we didn't see or comment on each other's work. Always did we find each other from site to site. I need to continue this message Anil.

Daniel Turner March 1, 2023 at 12:23 PM A pleasure to read this confession of love, Lisa. It is beautifully written. I hope Pangie reads it. I know she'll be flattered. I would be:) Lisa Ricci March 1, 2023 at 1:25 PM Hello Daniel. I am ever so grateful for such a wonderful and generous review and commentary. Truly. And yes, never do I take such generosity for granted. I hope that pangie does see this, yes, I hope you are right. Thank you again. Have a wonderful night and I will return to your page very soon. Blessings (smile)