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A Beautiful View

When climbing over mountains our future was always below All our highs lay in the vales underneath the rainbow Now walking through vales our past is eternally above From where we seen the arc and ultimately fell in love For Love's Sake Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh 01/27/23

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Deb M

Date: 2/1/2023 11:52:00 PM

Absolutely love this David…its simply beautiful!! Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/2/2023 3:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Deb, when you view love through perspective, it can be all the more beautiful, cheers David

Valsa George

Date: 2/1/2023 8:26:00 PM

Beautiful brevity, with depth of romantic ardor! Only after climbing over mountains and walking through vales that you fell in love to last a life time. :) Instant love may not last!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/2/2023 3:52:00 AM

Heya Valsa, yeah this one is all about perspective, looking back through time from the spot where you now stand, and ultimately found love, a spot once viewed from above but had no idea you were viewing your future, indeed instant love can be ephemeral but still beautiful whilst the moment lasts, cheers David

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 1/29/2023 9:49:00 PM

A beautiful view and Poem, Not surprised it got a placement. Congratulations, David Take care, Shirley

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/30/2023 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Shirley, a little abstract perhaps, but then again so is love, it can happen in an instant yet last a lifetime, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/29/2023 9:14:00 AM

Hey, sweet friend, congratulations on your contest placement.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/29/2023 10:05:00 AM

Heya Jenna, I was pleasantly surprised to make a place with this short piece, perspectively written of course, but I think the message comes through clearly enough, cheers David

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/29/2023 2:43:00 AM

Such a sweet write. Thank you for entering it. God bless you always and congrats. Love, Gina

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/29/2023 3:29:00 AM

Heya Regina, I’m delighted with your placement, and thank you for stopping by with the good news, take care, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/28/2023 2:47:00 PM

Romantic, a nature-scape enhances loves beauty, an arc which marks love! B0L David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/28/2023 3:19:00 PM

Exactly what I was trying to portray Anaya, without too many adjectives, keeps it simple yet fully understood, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2023 10:17:00 AM

I remember this one David, sooner or later we settle down and meet our soul mate, but we still look out for the gold, we'll I do anyway lol Good luck in the contest. Hope your weekend is going well Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/28/2023 11:53:00 AM

I had this one up for a few hours, then took it down to tinker about with, I’m glad you remembered it Tom, I’m not a great romantic at heart, so I’m using perspective here as a different medium to view love, thanks so much for stopping by again, cheers David