A Beautiful Disappointment

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My beautiful white cat was such an affectionate little kitty, I am sad that now he rarely comes to me even to be petted. It's so strange because other cats I had used to sleep close by me!!

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Unlike a pillow lying near one’s head soft and pretty is the beautiful cat that only stays at the foot of the bed and still it needs food and water! Jan. 17, 2023 For Quote This Poetry Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Robert Warlov

Date: 1/25/2023 6:13:00 AM

Female birthing (estrus) necessitates extended negotiation/s with the world while the male psyche redounds to a singular function ~ "Reproduction". You're the wrong type.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2023 2:38:00 AM

We have to care for all, you and your kitty. Tender poem.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/17/2023 9:49:00 AM

worry not dear poet; evidently the redolence uv yourn tootsiez have besotted your kitty ;) Have a blessed week Andrea...much love, james

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/17/2023 9:02:00 AM

Getting old takes its time but it rules, and as certain as the day follows the night it comes' to pass. humans, animals and plant life, even the stars but in space time, it takes trillions of years. SHAME POOR KITTY AND POOR ANDREA WHO LOVES HER KITTY. Love and blessings. Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2023 10:31:00 AM

It's so strange that he cuddled so sweetly with me, and then a few month later he just wanted to sit at the bed post. I lure him with catnip but still he goes back to the post. Dang cat!! He does cuddle with me a few times a week. I just treasure those few time.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/17/2023 6:52:00 AM

Concise, touching description of how old age may affect a pet, Andrea. Janice

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2023 11:28:00 PM

He's barely one year old!!